FATAL NYGHTMARE Vs. Preach

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Apr 25, 2002
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Honestly I thought your shit was cool, so I will battle you. Normally I wouldn't but fuck it. 16 lines, no hate.... verse due immediately.

Preach? Like a Priest? You like touchin-little-boys?/
You like a silenced handgun, you bust-wit-little-noise/
You're fucked-wit-little-choice, while you forcin-rhymes/
Like a slut outside the club, I'll put this whore-in-line/
The more-inclined I spit the less votes'll-go-your-way/
I assume your S/N is supposed-to-show-you're-gay/
You've shown-your-flows-are-lame, what's next-to-do?/
Not hot but less-than-coo, your flows in text-is-through/
My shit's~simple? This kid's~riddle is far-from-raw/
In fact his shit's cooked, get booked like Harvard-Law/
My eyes-are-beamin-you & my nine'll-see-you-too/
I'm 'throwin bullets,' you gettin 'hit' like 'wide-receivers'-do/
The time-is-now, watch what ya say when rhymin-clown/
Cuz only time you want 'beef' with me is if we dinin-out/
Ya rap's-is-lookin-cheap, so practice-what-you-Preach/
Ya forcin rhymes, and with those tactics-you-are-weak/

Stay up.

Please explain your votes when you post them, folks.
 
Apr 7, 2005
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I'm 'throwin bullets,' you gettin 'hit' like 'wide-receivers'-do/
The time-is-now, watch what ya say when rhymin-clown/
Cuz only time you want 'beef' with me is if we dinin-out/
Ya rap's-is-lookin-cheap, so practice-what-you-Preach/
Ya forcin rhymes, and with those tactics-you-are-weak/
yessir
 

Jabbz

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FATAL NYGHTMARE said:

Preach? Like a Priest? You like touchin-little-boys?/

I assume your S/N is supposed-to-show-you're-gay/

Ya rap's-is-lookin-cheap, so practice-what-you-Preach/
damn, way to attack his screenname playboy. this is what i like about fatal's shit, he can find personals on ANYBODY, even a dude who only been here for less than half a day.

FATAL NYGHTMARE said:
My shit's~simple? This kid's~riddle is far-from-raw/
In fact his shit's cooked, get booked like Harvard-Law/
these lines flowed together clean as fuck boy...... AND his shit do seem like a riddle though, hard to read and shit. but he do got some spits though so we'll see what he comes back with.

FATAL NYGHTMARE said:
I'm 'throwin bullets,' you gettin 'hit' like 'wide-receivers'-do/

Cuz only time you want 'beef' with me is if we dinin-out/
ooooooooow weeeeeeeeee.
 
Jul 7, 2005
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haha... how yall niggas gonna post up a thread and battle 2 hours after i leave for the day?

i'll have my verse up as soon as possible...
 
Aug 26, 2002
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#7
i got off work....
soon as you posted..
.so i have to dip...

then when i got home..
my cable connection wasnt workin casue they were working on it..
..
so i had to do it this morning..
my bad it took so long on mines..

5000
 
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First off, how you gonna say my shit was coo, then say it was lame in your verse? haha...oh and you used a punch from my battle wit JLMACN...haha, let's go son...


Peep Game...

Mistaken-For-Greatness-This-Guy's-Wack!/You Waitin-To-BITE-Back!/
Cuz Like Fatal's Bitch, Your Rider's Just Fakin-The-Climax!//
My Stroke-Is-The-Best/ Hit Wit Quotez-To-Impress/
Ayo Fuck Cuttin Throatz, Nigga I'll Choke-You-To-Death//
Fatal's A Nightmare? That's Debatable-At-Best!/
Call Me Out N Drop Weak? It's Like You Blazin-Ya-Casket//(overkill nigga)
A Waste,You-Aint-Jack-Shit/ I'm Trainin-This-Wack-Vet/
Then I'll "Put You Ta Rest" Man, Your Game-Is-Just-Past-Tense!//
Call Me Priest? It Fits Cuz Bitch Is Just Easy-Prey!/(pray)
Leave Ya Weak-N-Frayed,Put Ya "Face On The Carpet" Like This Breezy's-Gay!//
Wit Slick-Bars-I-Slit And Spit-Dark-With-In/
Cuz Like "Attorney's Wit Big Mouths" I'll "Dis-Bar-Ya-Lips!//
This "Vet's-Shit-Just-Lackz/P Spit? It's-A-Rap!/
Cuz Fatal Sayin "Stupit Shit" It's Like A Jester's-Act!//
Discussin-My-Dominance Like My Tongue-Is-A-Hollow-Tip/
Watch Me "Devour This Pussy" While This-Fucka-Just-Swallows-Dick//
 
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i aint gonna lie i still dont like fatal but his ish was a lot smoother than other guys and more direct i guess you would say. the rhymes were prolly about the same but i have to vote for fatal.-
 
Jul 7, 2005
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no doubt dog^^but forreal, if being direct wins battles i could just say his name in ery line and shit...

but yeah, if fatal got anything he got a smooth flow...(except the last line... haha...)

im still tryin to feel this site out, see what you guys like to read, once i figure it out it's nothin...

anywayz, that's 1-0 fatal...


how many votes are we going to?


oh, and is there any of those online crews or whatever?
 
Apr 25, 2002
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Preach said:
First off, how you gonna say my shit was coo, then say it was lame in your verse?
Just a battle tactic.

Preach said:
haha...oh and you used a punch from my battle wit JLMACN...
Really? Which one? My bad homie I just skimmed through that verse. It was not intentional, believe me.

@ KF, why do you talk shit about me and then vote for me? I see your explanation, but we don't need to know you don't like me....

BTW good verse Preach, you got lyrics fa sho.
 
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haha, nah you didnt exactly use a punch from mine... you said touchin little boys, i said touchin kids ass or sumthin like that... just a battle tactic... haha...
 
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#15
honestly..

i give Fatal a small upper hand on this..
when it comes to Metaphors and Multi's..

but the rhymin....Preach took this shit to another level ..i feel..
...

and im more of a rhymin person...(i like rhymes more)
...but since this is a battle forum..
and Multi's and Punchlines....and metaphors....are what we look for..
....then...
ima say Fatal took this..

vote- Fatal

very good shit though Preach...

5000
 
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man fatal, haha... this site had me fooled... i read through a few battles and it looked like folks was votin for the people with the better multis and junk(and yes, i had more,if not better, multis) so that's what i focused on... i guess ima just have to put everything together and take some real time in our rematch... haha

oh, and that's 2-0 FATAL... let's get the rest of the votes in...
 
Feb 5, 2005
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aight..i aint gonna lie...

Fatal, you surprised me on this one..I really dug your lines this time...i could picture the flow in my head...

Preach, no disrespect mayne, but I was feelin your stuff that you posted in your introductory thread more than this...to me, it seemed like you were tryin to impress us too hard this time...just be yourself man...

Imma give this one to Fatal, but i'm lookin forward to some more stuff from you Preach...maybe I'll battle you soon..
 

Jabbz

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Jun 3, 2005
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Preach said:
no doubt dog^^but forreal, if being direct wins battles i could just say his name in ery line and shit...
i think what playboy meant was he attacks you and only you. everything he spit was about his opponent (you), you spit at him but you also used some basic disses that could apply to anyone. a lot of people cry because fatal gets votes they feel should go to them, but honestly fatal is the total package when it comes to battling. i knew that the first time i read one of his battles when i first got here. you are new so you may feel this is nut riding or whatever, but fatal got this one due to the above explanation. as for your multis, they are raw no doubt. you and fatal are probably the most evenly matched pair in here. very good battle. stay up player.
 
Apr 25, 2002
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Preach said:
i guess ima just have to put everything together and take some real time in our rematch...
Take time? I only take 5 minutes homie! Seriously, ask The Worst about that shit. LOL.

Nah but I'm not even involved in battling on here anymore, I stopped not too long ago. The only reason I threw this battle up was because I saw your shit and felt threatened. LOL. So that rematch will have to wait until I make my official return.

Good shit though homie, I really mean that. You got what it takes to destroy some (or most) of us vets around here.
 

Stealth

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Tight spits by both of you. I'm lookin forward to seein more shit from you Preach - just gotta be a little more direct I guess. You got the style and the rhymes, you just need a little more of that "cleverness". Not to say your shit wasn't sharp - your shit would beat a lot of the heads on here. It just wasn't enough to beat Fatal this time.

Fatal - nice shit man. I dunno why, but of all the posts you've done lately, I was flowin along with that one in my head the best.

Vote - Fatal Nyghtmare