The Official Random Thought Thread
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I do. Rhymes with multi's like that come and go for me, though.
Sometimes I can really do some cool shit, while other times it's pretty basic stuff.
Here's a little of what I've written in the past:
I think my main issue with my rhymes is sometimes I lose direction, or the message itself is really deep and people lose focus on it. I'm not deifying myself, but I know what it's like to read some really personal shit and get lost in translation.
Sometimes I can really do some cool shit, while other times it's pretty basic stuff.
Here's a little of what I've written in the past:
I think my main issue with my rhymes is sometimes I lose direction, or the message itself is really deep and people lose focus on it. I'm not deifying myself, but I know what it's like to read some really personal shit and get lost in translation.
I have to be honest, sir... I'm impressed.
I think if anything, you try to hard to multi. Perhaps sometimes you lose direction trying to rhyme.
You don't have to tell me that a reader gets lost.. That's the point of writing. Everyone takes what they want out of a piece. Have you thought of getting published? It's not terribly hard.
I think if anything, you try to hard to multi. Perhaps sometimes you lose direction trying to rhyme.
You don't have to tell me that a reader gets lost.. That's the point of writing. Everyone takes what they want out of a piece. Have you thought of getting published? It's not terribly hard.
Not me.... lol... I'm not musically inclined. My friends band got back together after they had a falling out. They do mostly classic rock cover songs but do have some of their own stuff they slide in throughout the setlist. They play at places all around the lake and even at the beer gardens during the state fair usually.
Thanks, man. What's odd is I've only been writing since November. I never put pen to paper to write before that.
And actually you're completely right. Sometimes I'll have a solid thought for the next few lines of my work, but I'll rush myself and forget then search for other ways to word the message and it becomes convoluted to me.
And then there's times where I just nail the writing in one thought without any work.
That first poem/lyrics I quoted is actually a second rewrite. I took time on that to make sure the message was there and the punch was felt at the end.
My grandmother has been published several times, and I've thought about it before, but didn't know where to start. I guess that's as easy as asking her.
I took that riddle and posted it online and my brother-in-law and a family friend both had two completely different interpretations of what I meant. I like the fact that what I write can be taken completely out of context and read another way.
Here's an example of something I wrote about my ex that people took in both a negative and positive light:
The people that know me really well knew that I was pointing the finger at her, but others who don't grasp my sense of humor thought that I was pointing the finger of blame at religion itself.
I honestly like shocking people and evoking emotion out of them. We can't all be dead to real pain or act like it doesn't affect us.
And who's to say that I wasn't pointing a finger at both?
And actually you're completely right. Sometimes I'll have a solid thought for the next few lines of my work, but I'll rush myself and forget then search for other ways to word the message and it becomes convoluted to me.
And then there's times where I just nail the writing in one thought without any work.
That first poem/lyrics I quoted is actually a second rewrite. I took time on that to make sure the message was there and the punch was felt at the end.
My grandmother has been published several times, and I've thought about it before, but didn't know where to start. I guess that's as easy as asking her.
I took that riddle and posted it online and my brother-in-law and a family friend both had two completely different interpretations of what I meant. I like the fact that what I write can be taken completely out of context and read another way.
Here's an example of something I wrote about my ex that people took in both a negative and positive light:
The people that know me really well knew that I was pointing the finger at her, but others who don't grasp my sense of humor thought that I was pointing the finger of blame at religion itself.
I honestly like shocking people and evoking emotion out of them. We can't all be dead to real pain or act like it doesn't affect us.
And who's to say that I wasn't pointing a finger at both?
