New Song!!! I swear this is the best shit I've ever done.

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Private MarbleMouth I see you still attempt to allgn your music with melodies and fail miserably...
There is a nice patch of grass on a hill somewhere that just begging for you to sit on,put a pistol in your mouth and finally blow up in the rap game....I'm tellin you man, you got potential (I mean if potential is the ability to make hundred of people shake their head in disgust and laugh uncontrollably at your useless existence...than u have TONS)

I feel your music sounds as if a down syndrome kid was attempting to rap, and his producer is a tone deaf crackhead with one finger and a bad case of the twitches....i'd prefer to listen to kittens get stuffed into a giant running blender than this garbage.

You weren't dropped on your head as a child, but I sure bet you were kicked in the head by a horse at the age of 2....its the only way anyone could imagine that simping the way you do is cool. SuperManning, I'm shoving a colossal asteroid sized chunk of krytonite up your ass boy....and the only thing you'd probably say is...."ouch daddy go slow it still hurts from last night with uncle roger" you aint from wyoming....you from Why-am-i-such-a-simp....ole hillbilly inbred country backwood buttpluggin cowtipping crip wannabe from Wysimping?

Mayor of Laramie called...said if you show your face "in town" they gonna "lynch ya up like a colored boy drinking from the wrong fountain, y'undstand?"

Serious SuperSimp, go shoot yer eye out with a red ryder rifle kid
 

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Remember that commercial for Fruity Pebbles where Barney Rubble raps? He's a better rapper than you.

I'm not even trying to be a dick homie. I have no idea who you are or your history here in the Open Forum, I'm just being honest.

You sound like you're just talking. And then there's weird pauses in the verses. The bitch can not sing. Dump her ass off and find someone who can sing the chorus properly. That won't change how you sound, but at least the chorus will be good.

 
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some great jokes in this thread.... lolin quite a bit in this bitch.... buuuuut.....
this song needs WORK!!!! production... man yo engineer need a new job or PRACTICE AND EXPERIENCE.....
the only people that will ever be interested in this song will be teenage mexican girls and the grown ass men that picc them up from junior high..... you are super simpin bro; not talkin shit, i have no idea who the fucc you are.... you are white but you sound mexican rappin.... and thats not a compliment.... you gotta have balls in this rap shit.... i aint with that swag shit bro but i think you need to go ahead and snatch some of that up on your next trip to the Super WalMart....

and goddamn i aint seen that run dmc rappin ass fruity pebbles commercial in about 15years.. thats a trip down memory lane....
 
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On some real shit I thought of this Homie today LOL!!!!

My babies mama was watching Dr. Phil and they were talking about online / text bulling & sex. Which they refered to "Sextual Messaging" LMAO!!!!

I was like WTF? Dr. Phil needs to come check out the SICCNESS and pklitzky's song LOL!!!!!
 

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^ yeah theres this old ass cell phone commercial that was like that, i forgot what the shit was then a ringtone company did it. he got jacked for his shit

didnt this nigga say textual ecstacy on the song roflllllllllllllllllllllllllll

that shit is super funny

he should be rich
you should sell your song to justin timberlake hed bank off of you
 
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^ yeah theres this old ass cell phone commercial that was like that, i forgot what the shit was then a ringtone company did it. he got jacked for his shit

didnt this nigga say textual ecstacy on the song roflllllllllllllllllllllllllll

that shit is super funny

he should be rich
you should sell your song to justin timberlake hed bank off of you
LOL!!!! that's real too. All this shit we be giving dude in here and watch his ass blow the fuck up off them songs LOL!!!!
 

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that song he recorded for his son was fucking hilarious. like the songs he makes are comedic genius and he dosent even know it.

why the fuck would you record a rap song with a heavy metal inspired chorus for your infant son

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaahahahahaha
oh dude the lols never stop. im sorry. i love his rap career.

i havent heard his new shit tho im still laughin at the first two i heard..maybe in the fall..im not ready....fuck around and hyperventilate...can i live
 
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the guy who recorded it had a shitty mic and I couldn't do anything else with that chorus, but I'm gonna eventually do it again and sing it lol. Yeah that song sucks dick, like most of you motherfuckers LOL.