New Song!!! I swear this is the best shit I've ever done.
- Thread starter pklitzky
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man, please just finish yourself off and swallow a box on razorblades and wash it down with a nice hot cup of broken glass and sulphuric acid you simp.
Your balls are still hanging on that bitches wall, and you will never get them bacl, that...and the non existent respect your entire states give you.
I have seen roadkill in Laramie that had more hot than you ever will, I think you need to do a song with LionoftheLake, cause you both are tone deaf and have no idea what good music is or how to make it.
please, just off yourself
"yeah baby...you know you the one for me, ill always be here for you no matter what, i dont care how many hickeys you come home with, how many cumstains i see on our sheets that aint mine..i dont care if you rerspect me less than last months tampon baby, i'll be here...evenb though the kid aint mind I dont care, even if it is black....Even though you gave me herpes, fucked my best friend, and still aint gave up the ass and we been together for 3 years online, i will always love you...When he beats your ass, i'll be there to take you to the mall and spend all my bread...i dont care if you fucked everyone I know, the gangbangs, the bukkake videos on pornotube, the double penetration addiction...i dont care, i'll be there...you need some money baby...Tell your man i'll take the bullet for you.."
Your balls are still hanging on that bitches wall, and you will never get them bacl, that...and the non existent respect your entire states give you.
I have seen roadkill in Laramie that had more hot than you ever will, I think you need to do a song with LionoftheLake, cause you both are tone deaf and have no idea what good music is or how to make it.
please, just off yourself
"yeah baby...you know you the one for me, ill always be here for you no matter what, i dont care how many hickeys you come home with, how many cumstains i see on our sheets that aint mine..i dont care if you rerspect me less than last months tampon baby, i'll be here...evenb though the kid aint mind I dont care, even if it is black....Even though you gave me herpes, fucked my best friend, and still aint gave up the ass and we been together for 3 years online, i will always love you...When he beats your ass, i'll be there to take you to the mall and spend all my bread...i dont care if you fucked everyone I know, the gangbangs, the bukkake videos on pornotube, the double penetration addiction...i dont care, i'll be there...you need some money baby...Tell your man i'll take the bullet for you.."
I only listened to the first half of the song. You need to work on your presence. It kinda sounds like you don't give a fuck and it makes me not give a fuck about what you have to say. The chorus vocals might be ok if they weren't so damn loud. Try turning em down till they sound like an ambient part of the beat. And the second verse was awful - from what I heard anyway.
Even with all of that, it's still better than your old stuff.
Even with all of that, it's still better than your old stuff.
And that's why you got the feedback you got asshole. I was probably the only one, besides Coondog that was trying to help you out. And give you honest feedback.
Your replies sound like your an over confidant loser. These fuckers are giving you an honest feedback, but you refuse to listen and take it (at least in some aspect) and fix what you need to fix. If you know your shit is not ready, don't release it (even for "feedback"). What you put in, is always what you gonna get back.
..but your not trying to hear anybody though. You Happy with it cause you and your circle of Homies said & think it's tight. You will never make it due to the fact that you ignore the facts. It's clear to see your mind is made up. And you honestly feel you don't need to change anything. So don't come in here and ask for feedback when you know we're not gonna tell you what you want to hear. If your mind is made up, so be it. Just don't ask random people for honest opinions. Unless your ready to take whatever the majority tells you and work on trying to fix that.
Oh, yeah! And this dude called and said he wanted his lyrics back!
Your replies sound like your an over confidant loser. These fuckers are giving you an honest feedback, but you refuse to listen and take it (at least in some aspect) and fix what you need to fix. If you know your shit is not ready, don't release it (even for "feedback"). What you put in, is always what you gonna get back.
..but your not trying to hear anybody though. You Happy with it cause you and your circle of Homies said & think it's tight. You will never make it due to the fact that you ignore the facts. It's clear to see your mind is made up. And you honestly feel you don't need to change anything. So don't come in here and ask for feedback when you know we're not gonna tell you what you want to hear. If your mind is made up, so be it. Just don't ask random people for honest opinions. Unless your ready to take whatever the majority tells you and work on trying to fix that.
Oh, yeah! And this dude called and said he wanted his lyrics back!
I am working on it, my mind is never made up. you don't know the first thing about me dude. Just cuz I don't chronicle my life on here anymore doesn't mean I'm not living it. I'm non refusing to listen to shit. I'm taking ALL the feedback I have gotten including yours. My replies are nothing more than what they need to be for the moment. I don't get involve with no situations involving text anymore, whether it be with girls on the phone, or myspace, or haters on the fucking siccness. I post, get what I need, and get out. That's why I have only 41 posts since may of last year. I don't live on the internet anymore and started getting the fuck out the house and doing shit. Some of yall still be doing the same shit cuz everytime I do post I see you same few motherfuckers saying the same shit about simping and havin' text and what not, yall need to grow the fuck up and do something with yourselves. NO I WILL NOT stop posting because I fucking can. just like YOU have the ability to post. If you don't like it, don't read it. If you gonna keep bringing up that old ass bullshit, keep doing it, but we know it's yall that can't get a grip on your addiction to type shit, not talk shit, type shit, in a rap forum that not even .00001% of the world reads any fucking way. There ain't a single motherfucker on here that can touch me and your bullshit typing mos def ain't doing shit to me either. LOL.
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