Track I Made Embraced by Mars, "Suicide Anthem"
- Thread starter SMCrazy
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I'm going home in 3 weeks and recording some tracks and a cover or two with Born2Suffer aka JP Death.
Beat for this tracks is nice. Mic don't really matter since you on like a trip hop tip. With a professional mic you'll sound mad different because of clarity. I'm not even exactly sure whats your normal tone and whats a voice in these tracks. I ain't gonna hate. It's not easy to make music.
Beat for this tracks is nice. Mic don't really matter since you on like a trip hop tip. With a professional mic you'll sound mad different because of clarity. I'm not even exactly sure whats your normal tone and whats a voice in these tracks. I ain't gonna hate. It's not easy to make music.
Honestly Crazy.. I've heard way worse.. I was kinda impressed dude.
I like the voice and direction you're going with. I'd maybe lose "the voice" for a few words.. ya know? Maybe come in and out of it. Listen to a lot of Mastamind, because that's kinda who you remind me of (when I say listen, study his flow.. take notes, etc etc.).
Also, you stress a few words, but I'd take it even further. Draw some of them out more and put real emotion into them, because it kinda sounds like you're just reading your lyrics off of a paper.
I like the voice and direction you're going with. I'd maybe lose "the voice" for a few words.. ya know? Maybe come in and out of it. Listen to a lot of Mastamind, because that's kinda who you remind me of (when I say listen, study his flow.. take notes, etc etc.).
Also, you stress a few words, but I'd take it even further. Draw some of them out more and put real emotion into them, because it kinda sounds like you're just reading your lyrics off of a paper.
I'm with Tax. I was impressed. And it def reminded me of Esham/Mastamind. Keep doing shit like this and show it to the right people and they will LOVE it. lol Better quality is always good, learning how to do hooks, getting a better beat, better mixing, etc is always good. Mostly all you need is practice. Just keep doing more and more and you'll find your own mistakes and work past them. Keep working at it.
