Ummm...
I guess I missed the point?
What I got about the first verse, was that you see death. I guess if that's in your thoughts, then great. I was just questioning your lyrics... seeing where they came from. Ya know? I'm tryin' to think of some Grimey places in the 425 where it goes down like that. I couldn't think of many. Bellevue? Everett? I guess it's hard for me to swallow that.
As far as my taste in music, I like a lot of different stuff. I'm really into Redman, Luda, The Dude. Funny type cats, that rap about "real", happy things.
Then I also feel Tupac, DMX, Nas. Serious type cats, that rap about "real", grimey things.
If I feel the flow and the lyrics make me really think, I'm gonna bump it. You got a ways to go if you wanna keep up witht he times, I'm not seeing anything new or different from you. Keep workin' though, network and you're bound to come tight if you stick with it.