u can tell hes unsure, he needs a lil more emotion, and energy, and his vocals could be louder, 2nd verse got ALOT better, but id still bump his shit, props to him for bein my age and doin this shit, hit up my soundclick in my sig, and pm yur feed
i mean, in the first verse, he didnt seem comfortable, its kinda hard to explain, but as a rapper myself, ive jumped on beats and felt awkward, and you can hear it in the recording, i heard some of that in his first verse, he seemed to shake all that, and do his thing on the second though
