Allright im listening and I dont know whos exactly
Beat Is Pretty dope, Sounds Like it could Use some heavy bass and it would be a def. knocker, but maybe I cant hear it because i have the normal speakers here, but anyways major props to whoever made the beat
1st verse- Im Guessing from the Verse that its Big ru. Sound like He Should Make His Rhymes A Little More Complex And I Think It Would Sound Hella Dope, also If He Said Things Clearer, But Other Then That I Feel The Style, shits hot And A Good Opening Verse
The Hook- That Shit Was fuckin' hot nothin' wrong that i heard with it, major props to whoever went on it, on point imo
2nd verse- I Liked The Concept He Was Tryna Kick on The beat but i didnt like how he delivered it shoulda switched it up with a different emotion, it was ok
3rd Verse - Like how This Dude Spit it,On Point, he could improve but hes on the right track, shit was dope tho'
4th verse - Yeah the Echo needs to go, he needs improvement and yeah sound like everyone was in the studio like shit we got 10 seconds left should we try to cut it?, and out of nowhere comes homeboy like lemme jump on that
overall everyone needs improvement but dont see why the 1st 3 cant make some really dope shit in the future the last one seems like he wasnt even serious about it
my 2 pennies im out