Thanks fo the comments, holmes
YoungVicious said:
I was liking the lyrics, you were spittin some clever shit....need to work on your flow more though, its still kinda sloppy. But the it wasn't bad by any means. Keep postin your shit up, you seem to be improving.
Yea, i know exactly what you mean by that! Without getting into too much detail, I usually--seriously, though--write about 2-3 new verses a week, so its hard to memorize em all and give em all the same "emotional output", ya dig? But, yeah, if i can be conceited for a second, i notice myself getting better too :classic:
Ill post up a new thread, once the full version of this track gets approved on mp3.com.....im tellin yall....the second 1/2 of the track is heated!!