Da song is tight but fuck Mayne. Its for da WESTBAY, Make dat shit better. U need to change the verse and make it more catchy, somthin u can bump some shit too and get rid of that beat. shit is whack. Get a tighter beat dogg. Get somethin that just knocks off the hook mayne. I know da cd already came out but make a remix for the next cd. u need a way better beat blood. And change the hook. and u gotta shout the hook mayne so we can get hyphy to it, i got one for yall.
"Cause im a westbay rider
westbay niner
westbay fighter
smokin tires
getin higher
cause im a westbay rider"
Somethin u can get hyphy too, somethin u gotta yell hella loud, with a knockin beat mayne. And bust a flow in spanish too and let em know. u need da westbay coalition.
get homeboys from epa,redwood, mateo, south city, daly city and frisco. Remember make it hyphy make it fast paced make it bumb. fuck the rock and roll beat. Thats just my opnion