Vital!

[p.ellz]

p.ellz ripped it

appreciate it

 

[ant_johnson_16]

I'll call you a bitch to your bitch face. Just ask Liquid Assassin.

God damn...LDS had his creatine shake today...

 

[DonavanBStrange]

P. ellz i didnt even know u rapped?...

 

[L.D.S.]

God damn...LDS had his creatine shake today...

PFFT HAHAAHA I woke up today and adapted the "givafuckless" attitude. Plus, I really was joking.

 

[jake921660]

I wasnt calling you uptite LDS because I know 99% of your posts are sarcastic, but others on here cant seem to take a joke. It might be due to the fact that its hard to see sarcasm over a forum.

But what I said about your moderation abilities is true though. I remember I commented on them a while back jokingly and both you and Asmo didnt really apreciate it to well lol.

 

[Zer0.MediA]

i hella elevated since this shit

Since when? The month or two ago that you recorded it?

Sure.

Anyhow, if you're 3rd... you're better than Nate and a bunch of other bullshit I've heard, but you're slow and generic. I personally think the last verse was the best. Def the most creative.

 

[PoetiCCC]

whoever is on tha first verse Enunciate your words please.....really not a bad style but i cant really understand anything your saying......
2nd dude sounds about as early 90's as it gets....ahaha....i kinda dug it though.....
3rd dude prolly the best on tha tracc....generic sounding tho.....ok lyrics but it sound like you were pushin too hard for tha wordplay tho....
last verse...ummm needs work....ahahah....

 

[NZTECHFAN]

Since when? The month or two ago that you recorded it?

Sure.

Anyhow, if you're 3rd... you're better than Nate and a bunch of other bullshit I've heard, but you're slow and generic. I personally think the last verse was the best. Def the most creative.

thanks yeah thats me first and last ..

 

[meltamic]

im up for part 2, yall game?

 

[TheVille31]

need to get quickness on the next song

 

[PoetiCCC]

someone send it to me if you guys do this again I'll throw a verse on it....~2`

 

[DonavanBStrange]

Since when? The month or two ago that you recorded it?

Sure.

Anyhow, if you're 3rd... you're better than Nate and a bunch of other bullshit I've heard, but you're slow and generic. I personally think the last verse was the best. Def the most creative.

wtf? the last verse was the best one huh zero? once again ur an idiot, the 3rd verse was the only decent one on there,

 

[Zer0.MediA]

And once again, I don't really give a fuck about your opinion.

 

[NZTECHFAN]

Vital! Part 2

i have the beat and iv done my verse

24 second verse to start the track off
chorus
50 second verse
chorus
1 min 28 my verse
chorus
24 second verse to finish
chorus

the beat is diabolical so make your dibs on wat verse u want, its also for fast rapping.. first in first serve..

and someone can pick to do the chorus if they want by all means

so dibs your part in this thread

 

[jake921660]

24 second verse to start the track off
chorus
50 second verse
chorus
1 min 28 my verse
chorus
24 second verse to finish
chorus

Bit selfish dont you think?

 

[NZTECHFAN]

Bit selfish dont you think?

if i am for that long i guess its not selfish but more of a risk to keep the energy thru-ought therefor i have to come harder..no homo

btw its all fun man if we do a part three i dont intend to have any say on my verse length

 

[PoetiCCC]

yo I'll do tha second verse send it to me......~2`

 

[NZTECHFAN]

k bro give me like 15 mins

 

[TheVille31]

better be some siccness references is this shit

 

[Asmodeus]

Fuck it let me take a crack at this!