Troll-VS-INDECENT

[TUNEZ_PWP]

fuck a text flow beto see me at my next show
ill sign you autograph so you can keep it by your pillow
sily hoe the only way that id slit my wrists
is if your fat smelly mom called me to claim your sis

i understand that you feel like you got somthin to prove
but whats the muthafuckin point?all you do is lose
my ryhmes suck like white gurls hmmmm thats wack
your ryhmes are long awaited?have you been smokin crack?

how many bills in a rack? and how many has crossed yer thumbs?
how many bullets do you got in your imaganary gun?
you really seen a body twitch dead in a pool of blood?
how many years have you gang banged i bet you its none!

fuck this im tired of burning you like a bad case of herpies
your punishment for failure is givin me fifty burpies
so till next time you think that your the great brown hype
get on your knees close your eyes and speak to my mic (_)_)////D~~~



goodnight and dont respond im done with you....NEXT

 

[TROLL]

gotta give it to troll, if for no other reason - because he has more bars.

nah homie, go by content and quality not quanity.

now, as for spelling/punctuation/grammer errors? troll, how you gonna come up in this piece with your shit all riddled with errors? wasn't you clownin' on clown for his atrocious spelling in another thread? check the link:
troll clowning indecent's spelling
kinda makes you a hypocrite.... ya think?

i never said my spelling was perfect, in fact, i admitted that it can be quite chaotic at times because i get impaitent and lazy and figure as long as the point is made, then does it really matter??
put a lil emphasis. on BORED i really had nothin better to do at werk so jus said fuck it and skimmed thru his shit scince it was already op on the screen.

y'all both be doin' these ones: makein (makin') or hatein (hatin'), as well as improper usage of your (possesive, ie: your mom's asshole.) vs. you're (contraction of "you are," ie: you're both assholes.). spell checking won't help you with the latter, you gotta watch your shit yourselves to make sure you're using the proper form.

and i guess proper wording for fa sheez is for sure. I can care less how its spelled or what punctuation is incorrect as long as its read able. if yuo cna raed tihs tehn it dosent mttaer.
point taken.

the way I see it, the less spelling/punctuation/grammer errors your shit has, the more people gonna take you as being serious,

if your typing flowz on message board and are expecting people to take you serious....do i even need to continue? would I be typin like dis in an essay or a somthin elze that iz goin to be judged on HOW itz typed? No...

Indecent, ill post my response soon.

 

[TROLL]

skill....


Your a newbie you groupie, its time to set it off
IL let it off,
Verbally hurt and show you’re soft

You’re like Sean Penn, you loss fights and turn retarded
A no game nobody, take your pride and guard it

You ride in garments; my soul is strong and hardened
I stay making hits player, you plant flowers in gardens

IL have your bitch doing more back flips then Ozzi Smith
You want to hear some word play, your gay and I’m THE SHIT

Rewind it trick,
So you can try to find me “slip”
You love to read my posts like you were a Columbine KID

Your loosen the bid homie, all it takes is time
I stole your spot light, fans, and your inch of shine

Is all your research supposed to make me hurt
I’m so turf, fuck what you’ve seen or heard

So next time you see me, try to keep a tab
I go bad like your dad, or like Jabbz in rehab

INDECENT THE SLAPMASTER 707

how new must i be if u got verbally mishandled?-
ur spitz ain tight, hockin loogies like a camel-

thats as far as it will get, you have tested your limit-
u wouldnt be in this game without the eminem gimmick-

you'd be a joke, sayin indecent's how your acting-
claimin that your slappin when im doin all the smackin-

the only turf u know about are kickin rocks on your way-
too easy to be unorignial and simply claim your gay-

saying your the SHIT, makin me laugh u lil nerd-
ur basically right,u just an unskillful turd-

your word play is preschool, rippin is vaginal-
my knuckles like stone out to fracture your mandible-

your damn right im a troll, casting spells on your noodle-(brain)
im a mythical creature when your hardly a poodle-

left u confused, scratchin like u were infested with lice-
cuz your album got bought and was soon returned twice-

how many people have said they were gonna SET IT OFF?-
all talk they get dropped and start takin off like randy moss-

what did u expect if u went and tried to test me-
how u gonna clown someone else in a diss against me?-

why do u and krypto go and share a username??-
but your the only one postin, dont u think thats kinda lame??-

talkin a gang of shit, need to be taught how to act right-
usless to the game like a blind man with a flash light-

ripp u up and spit u out, pick the rest up out my teeth-
raped u verbally, i must be the lyrical priest-

 

[BETO916]

@ TUNEZ

If I'm so wack /
why you feel the need to respond?

fuck bars /
I'm gonna drop a few more bombs

probably suscribed to the thread /
so you'll get an alarm

loggin' on just to see /
your "rep" get harmed

keep on sleepin' /
I'll hit you while I'm on tour

a rack is a thousand /
who the fuck you do shows for??

that shit is suspect to me /

matter of fact /
I don't believe you're from the V

'cause I've never seen a mark /
smashin' down Magazine

and as far as your team /

they're lookin /
hungry and lean

'cause a cum shot to the eye /
is the only way they see cream

you're a bum /
strugglin' to get some cash

who the fuck are you /
to question my past

I've been gettin' money /
since green's been the color of grass

so I just sit back and laugh /
at your futile attempts /

to act tough /
when you're softer than fresh prince

You're right I never gangbanged /
it's bad for business

I've seen plenty of blood /
had to pick up pieces

of brain, mane /
had to clean up organs & feces

right after the dirt had been done /

my homie's gone now /
what the fuck am I gonna tell his son?

and that's just a sample /

of shit in my life /
drama I had to handle

but through all of that shit /

maintained, mane /
got through that shit

this rappin's a release /

if not for hip hop /
I'd be a different beast

that's all for now /
so to that I say peace

 

[FATAL NYGHTMARE]

Not to talk shit but, if you think yours was better then you are on crack . That was pretty wak TROLL.

I wasn't even gonna respond to this thread, but I've seen enough bullshit. Homeboy, you have no right to call anybody whack.

 

[FATAL NYGHTMARE]

If anything you're picking on YOURSELF. Those flows are so whack you might as well be clowning yourself.

 

[BETO916]

To be SERIOUS, My Brother was killed on MAGAZINE ST. in 1992 by some MARKS.

God Bless

THERES MARKS ON EVERY STREET OUT HERE HOMIE.

as there is in EVERY city

stay on your P's & toes

 

[BETO916]

no serious shit talkin' here potna...just like when you're hoopin'...it's part of the game.

because you can't see the other cat or hear the tone of his voice, it's hard to tell when dudes are gettin' serious or not....but like you I'm here for the sport.

peace

 

[TROLL]

im just here to battle not talk shit. but its hard not to when others do.

i wasnt talkin shit homie. Good battle anyways, ill post up my third soon.

And i guess it would be all a matter of opinion on who won, lets see what the general view is...OH and by the way...everyone copy and paste your own battles because im going to delete this thread and repost it. This was a battle between me and indecent, all other battles get your own post =)

 

[BETO916]

fa sheeze...we did get carried away.

ONE.

good battle though...I'm glad this page is gettin' it's fire back.

 

[TROLL]

^^
yeah, the pot is beginning to be stirred again..