Troll-VS-INDECENT

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Aug 8, 2003
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No offense, strictly skillful...


Keep the trap closed, like it was meant to keep a secret-
cuz something intresting to say.....u hardly ever frequent-

keep it to yourself for everybodys sake (please)
talkin like a zone when your barely even shake-(trees)

Understand that Im a TROLL, never taught to keep composure-
and your only INDECENT when the following is exposure-

I cant believe that you rap, werent you werkin the promo?-
the game doesnt need another half hearted no-sho-

and the light started to shine a lil in your way-
when you opened your mouth you brought shame to the bay-

Im not floatin in the game, to hold heads down-
but u made a lil splash and soon began to drown-

call it like i see it, your the weak link in our chain-
and the game,i mean,chain was the length of a crane-

Krypto made you tight, but dont take it to the heart-
if u dont mind gliding in the winds of another mans fart-

u couldnt shit on a mic if u planned on squating in the booth-
better hope ur used to hatein me and the way i speak the truth-

ur a softie type cat, speakin bubble gum rap-
claimed to be master at slappin and wound up gettin slapped-

u act....wifebeater's dont make u rappers-
when u hear the bell ring, time for crumblin some crackers-

I know its hard to bear, lyrical salt upon your wounds-
time to cut to the chase no..your always coming soon-




 
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ooh...you took a flick with some ducks!!!
Dont be mad at me , be mad at the game homie. You will be stuck on this site while i make power moves.
you think you're the only one on here doin' it?? You ain't have to post no flicks to "prove" yourself...that shit just makes you look insecure & juvinile.

But your opinion counts lmfao
obviously it does, because you got so butt hurt...
For every 1 person who dosent like me theres 5 that do
no one said they didn't like you squarebiz, just critiquing your flows...that's what this page is for.
you think we were supposed to just be all over your nuts?
this is the SICCNESS homie..you want dick riders, go to myspace with that shit.
 
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lol, come on yall lets stick to the topic...

good battle. may the best man win.


indecent&krypto said:
Im sorry i cant be the M&M that YOU so want to be. You guys can PLAY with WORDs while I play on bitches.lol
INDECENT&KRYPTO said:
Dont be mad at me , be mad at the game homie. You will be stuck on this site while i make power moves. For every 1 person who dosent like me theres 5 that do . But your opinion counts lmfao
Im not sure if that was directed towards me but lets jus say i plan on moving way past the confines of this message board. I used to be up in here way more often..
 
May 19, 2005
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gotta give it to troll, if for no other reason - because he has more bars.

now, as for spelling/punctuation/grammer errors? troll, how you gonna come up in this piece with your shit all riddled with errors? wasn't you clownin' on clown for his atrocious spelling in another thread? check the link:
troll clowning indecent's spelling
kinda makes you a hypocrite.... ya think?

y'all both be doin' these ones: makein (makin') or hatein (hatin'), as well as improper usage of your (possesive, ie: your mom's asshole.) vs. you're (contraction of "you are," ie: you're both assholes.). spell checking won't help you with the latter, you gotta watch your shit yourselves to make sure you're using the proper form.

the way I see it, the less spelling/punctuation/grammer errors your shit has, the more people gonna take you as being serious, even amongst your peers (see #2). oh, and yes.... I'm aware that not capitalizing at the start of a sentence constitutes a grammatical error. I only capitalize I (me) and for emphasis on line. and yes, I know... that may make me a hypocrite also. so.... sue me..

props for battling though.... that's what really counts.

and no offense/disrespect intended.... bitches. :devious: :paranoid: :rolleyes: lol.








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BATTLE ROYAL!!!!

homosexual you shouldve been a catholic priest
Let me guess /
that's YOUR religon

Runnin' to "confession" /
so the priest can run up in him

you stay surrounded by chumps /

"warriors & saints??!!" /
look like faggots & punks


yeah.. this is fun
 
Oct 10, 2004
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i aint a catholic and i aint a bitch

tunez will smack the shit out yah for bumpin your lips

if warriors and saints look like bitchs and punks

then say that shit to my face and end up in my trunk

yeah this is fun!!! is what you say when you suck dick

you nine one six man slut and block snitch
 
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dude is hella funny /
thinkin' he pump fear

internet thug makin' threats /
from way over there

n'sync is hardcore /
compared to you squares

your crew look like the black backstreet
mean muggin @ one hour photo /

tryin' to sell a CD? /
I thought it was an ad for jotos

man, come to my city /

Right here off of Stockton /
where the livin' is shitty

12 year olds on the corner /
yeah, they on their grizzly

while you in the house hidin' /
under your grandma's titties
 
Oct 10, 2004
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beto is that your name or should i call you gil?
you still messed up in the head takin hormoan pills?
trust me i know your crazy and wanna be a lady
but a sex change dont mean that you can have my baby
im sorry im not gay your swingin the wrong way
go find your homie micheal find some boys and play
you aint a gangsta ...so why the fuck you keep on frontin
come to the 707 if you feel the need for a punkin
ive been in the shit my click is known for funkin
hop the bushes with a 4 fith n show you somethin

blah blah blah
im done with you

insert name here "_________" your crap take a nap
 
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blah blah blah
those are the best lines you wrote /

your rhymes suck like white girls /
smell like compost

..that means /
they smell like shit

my rhymes are long awaited /
like Revenge of the Stith

givin' you fits /

Leave you in the vocal booth /
slitin' your wrists

Floor covered in Kool Aid /
as you shake and twitch

Lean over to your body /
give your neck a twist

Take a piss on your body /
and smash outta that bitch

and head to the store /

and reminisce of your demise /
over a cold 4-O

Never thought of you as /
an enemy

I'll even spill some Hennessy /

Log on & tell Fatal to /
change your name to TUNEZ_R.I.P.
 
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well.. being called wack by some one who is wack is pretty funny

look at you...stopped battling troll to fuck with me.
beto916 is pretty wak i have to say. instead of noble it should say "SKIN FLUTE PLAYER"
sure do talk alot of gay shit...are you using this site as a dating forum??

thanks for your opinion baby girl