cool. i wasnt really feeling it so figured i wouldnt say anything but if you want the constructive criticism.....i guess i dont really like it cause its boring to me. when hip hop songs are about cliche topics they have to be either REALLY lyrically or production wise impressive for me to stay interested. ie, gift of gab, who will sometimes rap about the tired positive living bullshit we hear so many dudes talk about, but the way he puts words and rhymes together is so dope that i still dig his shit. not saying your lyricism was weak, but it didnt sound spectacular to me either, you know what i mean?
i think its really great that you write something that comes from the heart but to me it sounds like typical stuff ive heard plenty of times before...."i love you, ill always be there for you, etc. etc." which is fine, but i tend to enjoy songs with more depth and complexity where im not sure what the song is about and one could interpret them all sorts of ways (while still sounding tight of course). otherwise songs usually just bore me. but thats just my taste and i know many ppl dont feel the same way.
and i agree that the dark shots of you looking into the camera were a little creepy. you looked more like you wanted to chop someone up rather than tell them how much you love them haha. but the footage of your boy was real cool.
so all in all i wouldnt bump it...but thats awesome that he'll be able to hear songs you made for him when hes older. my dad never did that shit for me...fuckin asshole
