Struggles Of A Father...

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VERSACERO

VERSACERO

smoking meth with steve
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Nigga that shit is gay,get out of here with that soft ass shit,ha ha j/k I ain't into all that weird stuff though,you know,family,kids,fucking bitches when there alive.
 
$ileNt_eNe_ATL

$ileNt_eNe_ATL

Jefe De Los Pollos
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Aug 12, 2005
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the beat is tight as fuck .. i got a hook that fits in perfect...
as far as flow and delivery .. its cool but doesn't stand out from all the other stuff coming out you know?
 
SMILEY LOCZTERO

SMILEY LOCZTERO

Sicc OG
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this was my first attempt to do some real deep life story telling type shit..silent if you dont mind doing the hook id be glad to shoot it your way brotha i know you got kids as well and your a father with a story of struggle..a homie while back shot me hella beats so i was going through em and found it..if you can try to loop it and add another verse go for it silent and get on it..lemme know whats good..and also the verse was hard to write cause if i got too much on detail i would choke n start getting teary eye..this song took me almost a whole week to do only cause of the topic i do miss my son alot and i wanted to do something for him to keep his name alive
 
$ileNt_eNe_ATL

$ileNt_eNe_ATL

Jefe De Los Pollos
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SMILEY LOCZTERO said:
this was my first attempt to do some real deep life story telling type shit..silent if you dont mind doing the hook id be glad to shoot it your way brotha i know you got kids as well and your a father with a story of struggle..a homie while back shot me hella beats so i was going through em and found it..if you can try to loop it and add another verse go for it silent and get on it..lemme know whats good..and also the verse was hard to write cause if i got too much on detail i would choke n start getting teary eye..this song took me almost a whole week to do only cause of the topic i do miss my son alot and i wanted to do something for him to keep his name alive
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whats your email ? i'll shoot you what i have on an instrumental .. all i got on it is the hook but i have a verse written .. i'll shoot you a few tracks while I'm at it ..
 
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