I understand what ur tryna do with the dvd... And props for opening it up on some real life shit... But idk if a viewer that dosent post on the siccness would understand
The problem is that yea some of those people look bummy. People aint gonna understand why dudes r lookin like that n talkin bout "hip hop is in a state of 911" which is like 8 years old, theyre just gonna think "wow these niggas r super late". And also when u got that plus people like e-low bein interviewed, it gives it a vibe like "this must be a dvd about niggas that aint doin so good in the rap game"
Maybe puttin dates on the interviews wud help idk... Not a bad first try and ur parts werent that bad
The problem is that yea some of those people look bummy. People aint gonna understand why dudes r lookin like that n talkin bout "hip hop is in a state of 911" which is like 8 years old, theyre just gonna think "wow these niggas r super late". And also when u got that plus people like e-low bein interviewed, it gives it a vibe like "this must be a dvd about niggas that aint doin so good in the rap game"
Maybe puttin dates on the interviews wud help idk... Not a bad first try and ur parts werent that bad
The documentary was filmed over a 5 year span (including 14 months to edit) & released in 2011. It could of been done & released a lot sooner, but halfway through filming my mom (r.i.p) had her stroke & fell into a coma. That stopped production on it for 2 years.
That is why I understand what you mean by some of what they are saying may sound dated. I tried to edit it to where it could either be timeless or capture a time period.
I sincerely appreciate the feedback though at my first attempt. Deep into it I was told I had bitten off more than I can chew by some County people who got behind the film & were interested in it being finished. It's not like doing music videos etc. Keeping the story line for an hour can be a headache at times.
I honestly didn't want to put my personal story into it, but was advised by County people that the filmed lacked heart & something to keep it grounded. I looked for other artist that perhaps I could follow one on his personal journey, but most had the typical rapper story, "I never met my dad, my mom was on welfare, we live in the hood & I slang dope."
At that point I had given up until I was told to add my personal story. I kicked it around for months undecided until I seriously unwillingly did it.
The rest is history my friend.
Thank you for your feedback.