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Feb 21, 2004
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Untitled [To: Krissy]

if I could turn the sky upside down
we'd walk upon the clouds
and when your world is falling apart
even if your heart never allows
I'll be you, so you don't have to hurt
if I could elivate us to the stars
we would only ascend into a dream
somewhere in this life of ours

if I could draw the ocean for you
we'd gaze into glitter for hours
and when the mirrors too blury to see
even in the light of wilted flowers
I'll be you, so you don't have to hurt
if I could build us a piece of home
we would only descend into a dream
somehow it's all we've ever known
 
Feb 21, 2004
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...I have dreamt the day you would finally see
(everything you are is part of me)
to suffocate these words into your heart
to mend the pieces as they fall apart
If I pretend that your eyes couldn't paralyse me
I would throw away all we believe
perhaps it's unfair that I hate it when your not there
but I don't want to live life solitaire
and you'd take away the air I breathe
you'd take away all that gives me hope to d.r..ea..m
to watch the sun as it sets in your eyes
whisper "i love you" and never have to say goodbye
 
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your poetry is better than your rhymes... this is good material... quit rhymin and stick to writing your soul... seems more geniune and not forced like most of your rhymes sound... this sounds like you... shit is good though man... pretty good
 
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vivid as the sky (a wish)

I sunk beneath the horizion
into a sea of stars
and we ran to it's edge, forgetting all this is ours
hours passed and nights turned to minutes
a world of past souls that didn't find forgiveness
we've barely escaped
& yet a piece of me had died
from the shores of this desolate ocean
I whipe the sand from my eyes
I've drown in you, and you've freed me from harm
to belong in this place
you've released me from your arms
and with my hands, it is this second I found new hope
to raise to the sky, a single petal of one white rose
dust has disgueised the clouds
& ash distorted the air we breathe
I've sacraficed my own life, in hopes that you will believe
a mere second of solitude
& slowly a ray of sunlight breaks through
for all we have once lost
heaven has given this gift to you
 
Feb 10, 2004
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BLOOD & FIRE

Mon cherie
you remain a mystery to me
I see your face in every flame
with no answers , i have only myself to blame
of all the women i have known
ohh they're not you , i'd rather be alone.

TYPE O NEGATIVE