Yo - the dude is trying and putting something out there to be critiqued. If you don't like it, tell him why...but no need to clown on a youngster who gave it a shot and put it on the line like this...IMO Reckless, you need a lot of work. I tell that to my best friends too so don't let it get you down...put it in the back of your mind like "You know what? Fuck Illmannered, I'll show him with the next one"