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Sniko's Thought--
Like the other battle I've already voted on..i wasn't impressed with either verse.....
DJ Hex..you talked that shit before your verse..making me think for a half-second you would come tight...but you didn't.....what kinda verse was that??..this is supposed to be a BATTLE..and you didn't attack at all....and your rhyming was very basic...
Mr.Typcee...you at least attacked somewhat......which automatically gave you some points...but you still need work as well......next round...ATTACK...DISS....and your structure also needs work
..but i gotta vote
VOTE = MR.TYPCEE
Like the other battle I've already voted on..i wasn't impressed with either verse.....
DJ Hex..you talked that shit before your verse..making me think for a half-second you would come tight...but you didn't.....what kinda verse was that??..this is supposed to be a BATTLE..and you didn't attack at all....and your rhyming was very basic...
Mr.Typcee...you at least attacked somewhat......which automatically gave you some points...but you still need work as well......next round...ATTACK...DISS....and your structure also needs work
..but i gotta vote
VOTE = MR.TYPCEE
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Okay...Ive double checked everything
The score as of now is 4-2 TYPCEE's lead...
The battle is still open...Becuase i haft to vote & so does TRAGIC LOSSES...
Just a word of advice...If TYPCEE doesn't win it will be tied...So plan on have'n another verse due incase that happens...Ima reread the versus a few more times before casting my vote...
The score as of now is 4-2 TYPCEE's lead...
The battle is still open...Becuase i haft to vote & so does TRAGIC LOSSES...
Just a word of advice...If TYPCEE doesn't win it will be tied...So plan on have'n another verse due incase that happens...Ima reread the versus a few more times before casting my vote...
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HHHmmm...
HEX's...First thing...This line didn't ryme with nothing surrounding it...Nothing in the entire flow infact...'Stick n’ rip, now flip, catch this filmed in 9mm,"...You have very good vocab & are able to alternate words instead of just saying 'Like" or 'Im gonna" repeatidly wich alot of people seem to lack...I like'd this part alot 'he jus wasn’t on my frequency"...Just the way i can hear it said shivers vertabre's...You lacked direct disses but the one you had flowed smooth...'now fuck wit me, I bust out the teeth of every net mc, you to Tim C,
n' leave em stuck on stupid, lookin like they tounges in the penitentiary. "...Even thou i didn't understand the tounge in the penitentiary part untill you explained it...Flow was far from boreing...
MR.TYPCEE's...This bar was his sickest...'i pill apart fooz when they git ta steppin ta me, smoke so much weed, an average ass ENE like you would have brain epilepsy, but you need ta take time, check tha name, remember it, MR. TYPCEE, my shitz comin like facez of death, when tha rest iz strait disney,"...& that cuaght my eye...Aswell as compareing a jelly fish to a killa shark...On the negative side...He used the word 'me" far to much & in every context...'Fuckin wit me, Commin at me, Steppin to me"...Wich is repative & tends to make the reader/listener think that all you can do is say the same thing repeatidly just worded diffrent...His vocabuluary wasn't as advanced as HEX's...But it was supperior to alot ive seen on this board...The last detial ima add is that TYPCEE's verse was completely about HEX...He avoiding drifting off to talk about diffrent topics...
In conclusion...Both versus could have been better...But i will add that this battle was the best of this round IMO...
However im going to haft to vote MR.TYPCEE...The few lines that stood out is my reasoning...They just took to my likeing more so then the one's HEX had...HEX however did have some stand out things aswell...
HHHmmm...Maybe after the tourney you 2 should conduct a rematch?
HEX's...First thing...This line didn't ryme with nothing surrounding it...Nothing in the entire flow infact...'Stick n’ rip, now flip, catch this filmed in 9mm,"...You have very good vocab & are able to alternate words instead of just saying 'Like" or 'Im gonna" repeatidly wich alot of people seem to lack...I like'd this part alot 'he jus wasn’t on my frequency"...Just the way i can hear it said shivers vertabre's...You lacked direct disses but the one you had flowed smooth...'now fuck wit me, I bust out the teeth of every net mc, you to Tim C,
n' leave em stuck on stupid, lookin like they tounges in the penitentiary. "...Even thou i didn't understand the tounge in the penitentiary part untill you explained it...Flow was far from boreing...
MR.TYPCEE's...This bar was his sickest...'i pill apart fooz when they git ta steppin ta me, smoke so much weed, an average ass ENE like you would have brain epilepsy, but you need ta take time, check tha name, remember it, MR. TYPCEE, my shitz comin like facez of death, when tha rest iz strait disney,"...& that cuaght my eye...Aswell as compareing a jelly fish to a killa shark...On the negative side...He used the word 'me" far to much & in every context...'Fuckin wit me, Commin at me, Steppin to me"...Wich is repative & tends to make the reader/listener think that all you can do is say the same thing repeatidly just worded diffrent...His vocabuluary wasn't as advanced as HEX's...But it was supperior to alot ive seen on this board...The last detial ima add is that TYPCEE's verse was completely about HEX...He avoiding drifting off to talk about diffrent topics...
In conclusion...Both versus could have been better...But i will add that this battle was the best of this round IMO...
However im going to haft to vote MR.TYPCEE...The few lines that stood out is my reasoning...They just took to my likeing more so then the one's HEX had...HEX however did have some stand out things aswell...
HHHmmm...Maybe after the tourney you 2 should conduct a rematch?