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Oct 5, 2004
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BETO916 said:
this 'tard cant compete
with the likes of me

he's the type to ride a huffy
with no bicycle seat
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I've touched more chemicals then chemists
cooked dope in a tub

I'm unstable like nitroglycerine (sp)
destined to blow the fuck up
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I'm done with this rhyme
what you got for me next?

I bet you're awful in audio
because you're certainly terrible in text
beto needa change his name to BEAST EXTRAODINAIRE
 
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fuck it.. ima bite beto's style for a second
sawed off probably sound hella country "what you reckon?"

brown boy needa grow up.. whats wrong with brown MAN?
an the homie lee needa stop rhymin "hands" with "can"

where the fucks yall real talent?
ya real skills with these keys?

i aint sayin i got em
im jus sayin know what i mean? ha

aint nobody else in this thread ta' get heated
so call up ya mods.. go head, get my shit deleted

i usually dont do this shit
so go head, tear me apart

i'll rise from them ashes a flamin phoenix
log back on an tear out your heart

see now im jus gettin started
so i'll stop before i set fire to my keyboard

i'll end all this nonsense on this final note..
blah blah bitch moan somebodies mothers a whore
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that last lines me makin fun of you guys for constantly sayin bitch this bitch that son of a whatever type shit.. in case anybodies to simple to catch it IM JUST TRYNA HELP YALL OUT! ha
 
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#24
inphxerno said:
Half His Lines Are Fillers, Everyone In This Thread Is Wack, Rappin' Bout' Themselves For Half Of The Lines, The Other Half Is Self-Hype
step ya bars up
stop all the self pity

I could write you a haiku(sp)
and stil kill you with complex-ity

I give a fuck if you're not feelin' me
no cosign needed, my credits impeccable(sp)

I'll cut you're heart out like apocolypto(sp)
and throw away the rest of you

sorry to have to mess with you
but you got my name all in your cum catcher

I'm one of the ones you should study son
I've mangled and ravaged your favorite rapper

proved 'em all to be "b" actors
never livin up to the hype

emcees are RIP when they fuck with me
so step up you're next in line
 
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inphxerno said:
ALL YOUR BARS ARE FILLERS, you Should Be A Hype Man, Shitty Ass battler
I shut your ass up didnt I??

dont come up in my house talkin' shit if you cant take the same in return.

I havent even got started yet son.

by the way....I am I hype man....I cheer your mom on while she's givin' me brains.
 
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No You Didn't Your Still Wack As Fuck, And this Is the internet You DumbFuck What House????....Your Feel YourSelf To Much, And My Moms Dead Dumb Queer....But Your Still A Wack Ass Textcee
 
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A Line That Dosen't Get To The Punch, It "Fills In" Counting As A Bar But Having No Effect, Usually Its Used When You Can't Think Of A Punch And Need To Meet A Bar Requirement, A Rookie Ass Thing To Do
 
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dont all lines eventually get to the punch?.. i dont really like people like you.. no offense or nothin but fuck man.. people do this shit for fun to waste time an jus enjoy somethin other than bein bored.. an some asshole like you comes along tellin people there wack cuz they dont do shit the way you like it particularly done.. dont make sense to me if you aint like the shit why didnt you jus laugh to yourself at peoples "pathetic" attempts at rhyme an move the fuck on? or are you jus tryna enjoy somethin other than boredom?
 
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murderman said:
dont all lines eventually get to the punch?.. i dont really like people like you.. no offense or nothin but fuck man.. people do this shit for fun to waste time an jus enjoy somethin other than bein bored.. an some asshole like you comes along tellin people there wack cuz they dont do shit the way you like it particularly done.. dont make sense to me if you aint like the shit why didnt you jus laugh to yourself at peoples "pathetic" attempts at rhyme an move the fuck on? or are you jus tryna enjoy somethin other than boredom?
CO-SIGN.
I KNOW IM JUST DOIN THIS SHIT FOR FUN. QUIT TAKIN IT SO SERIOUS. ITS ALL GOOD PHONIEX WE JUST COME TO FLOW SO COOL DOWN ON THE HARSH CRITICISM.
 
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BrOwn_BoY said:
CO-SIGN.
I KNOW IM JUST DOIN THIS SHIT FOR FUN. QUIT TAKIN IT SO SERIOUS. ITS ALL GOOD PHONIEX WE JUST COME TO FLOW SO COOL DOWN ON THE HARSH CRITICISM.
with that shit said lets continue the fun..
brown boy a brown bagger, street corner bum
i already ran outta flow.. homie ran outta rhyme
i guess to some then this is jus some filler line HA!
that was a joke ima jokin muthafucker
i couldnt run outta rhyme if i was six feet under
even in death ima spit my shit an keep it UNreal
you dont needa know my life..
you dont needa hear me speel (sp?)
an with that said i guess im passin the mic
to the next muthafucka who needa SELF HYPE
 
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murderman said:
with that shit said lets continue the fun..
brown boy a brown bagger, street corner bum
i already ran outta flow.. homie ran outta rhyme
i guess to some then this is jus some filler line HA!
that was a joke ima jokin muthafucker
i couldnt run outta rhyme if i was six feet under
even in death ima spit my shit an keep it UNreal
you dont needa know my life..
you dont needa hear me speel (sp?)
an with that said i guess im passin the mic
to the next muthafucka who needa SELF HYPE
A YO MURDAMAN KEEP LETTIN ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK ABOUT MY FLOW BRUH ITS MUCH APPRECIATED. I NEED THE CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISISM.





 
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NAW BRUH I KNOW IM JUST SAYIN USSUALLY YOU GOT SOMTHIN TO SAY TO HELP ME IMPROVE MY GAME IM NOT BEIN SARCASTIC OR NOTHIN JUST LETTIN YOU KNOW I APPRECIATE IT.
 
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all these words with nuthin said
ya moufs hot like an oven but aint got no bread
mines is hot like lead up out the chamber
talkin shit but not spittin aint nuttin lamer
a phoenix flamer you good for a laugh
and Im high as an eye on a fuckin giraffee(c)
but you aint gotta be lit to know that you aint shit
critiquin out the moth leakin, will get ya ass dipped
GET KNOCKED THE FUCK OUT!!!! like Red runnin home wita limp....
and im so high i just gotta sit.....shit!