O/T: who is the illest unsigned rapper on strange forum?

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p.ellz

p.ellz

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shit was coo...try to enunciate more clearly....or it mite b the mic...or the mixing...i culdnt understand u 100%

delivery culd use work but that can b said bout me too
 
Shiro480

Shiro480

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p.ellz said:
shit was coo...try to enunciate more clearly....or it mite b the mic...or the mixing...i culdnt understand u 100%

delivery culd use work but that can b said bout me too
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its fuckin raw shit.. one take with no mixing...

the mic is also pretty shitty..

BUT with that being said, if mac dre can make dope songs over a prison phone, then i should be able to make fire with an actual set up..

my enunciation is definitely something ive been trying to work on, so thats cool that your with me on that haha..

what about the delivery though?? more emphasis of words... better tone? what up
 
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Kain

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I couldn't even get down for this even if I wanted to (a.k.a., I'm no rapper), but in my opinion (that of a 'fan' or some other non-sense), that first beat was better than the one Luscious provided.
 
p.ellz

p.ellz

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Shiro480 said:
its fuckin raw shit.. one take with no mixing...

the mic is also pretty shitty..

BUT with that being said, if mac dre can make dope songs over a prison phone, then i should be able to make fire with an actual set up..

my enunciation is definitely something ive been trying to work on, so thats cool that your with me on that haha..

what about the delivery though?? more emphasis of words... better tone? what up
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what program do u record in? i can teach u how to mix...shits ez

as for ur delivery....mo swag less energy...try to ride the beat


n id ratha get on luscious beat
 
NZTECHFAN

NZTECHFAN

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just record your verse over the sample of the beat i gave you .. start at 11 sec then go right till the end .. it then goes into the chorus ..

lay it down let us hear it then we will discuss afterwards

only 3 verses so make your shit hotter than ever if you wanna space on the track

you guys got 48 hours to get your verse done

We will gather the verses then create a new thread with a poll vote

Peace
 
Shiro480

Shiro480

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Mar 12, 2006
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mo swag, less energy??

haha... ill take it into consideration

imma try an get swag WITH energy.. cause i go crazy when i start and i cant tone down my shit or it isnt me
 
PoetiCCC

PoetiCCC

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Shiro you sound like you're just tryin to hard to hit the snares.....dont sound like you got any problem other than you just need to relax and maybe practice your verse more where it feels more natural to you to spit it......that shit was aiight tho.....better than a lot of other shit....kinda remind me of a mix between Beastie Boys and Digital Underground....ahaha.....
 
p.ellz

p.ellz

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Shiro480 said:
mo swag, less energy??

haha... ill take it into consideration

imma try an get swag WITH energy.. cause i go crazy when i start and i cant tone down my shit or it isnt me
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u gotta realise its not what u say as much as how u say it...90% of people i herd startin out rappin have a monotone high energy delivery....try to fluctuate ur tone more
 
Shiro480

Shiro480

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PoetiCCC said:
Shiro you sound like you're just tryin to hard to hit the snares.....dont sound like you got any problem other than you just need to relax and maybe practice your verse more where it feels more natural to you to spit it......that shit was aiight tho.....better than a lot of other shit....kinda remind me of a mix between Beastie Boys and Digital Underground....ahaha.....
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p.ellz said:
u gotta realise its not what u say as much as how u say it...90% of people i herd startin out rappin have a monotone high energy delivery....try to fluctuate ur tone more
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alright thanks guys..

both gave good advice..

enunciation, practicing the verse and fluctuating tone..

i can definitely do that shit..

appreciate the look out
 
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