New Song Up Feat. Taj-He-Spitz..

[DAT NIGGA TAZZ]

hah it was a slappin ass song and it was ur best shit yet... but damn why did u pick taji for a feature. dude is shartin on you

ur lyrics on it were cool but the delivery once again needs some help, u need to loose them braces nigga. but i can see you evolving into a good rapper, u just need to sound more natural when u rap, not like u reading a piece of paper, u need some swag too it.

 

[BASEDVATO]

Swag to it, is all it need. Its a word pronouncing and delivery thing

And fuck a hater you just done more then most these siccness myspace rappers

 

[Meta4iCAL]

no matter what damn near everyone on BART knows you by now, so you puttin yourself out there

you just need to come with more swagger and better emotion when you rap

and sorry to say but Taji did shit on you, haha, ut you had to expect that

beat was nice too

keep at it though

 

[montroller510]

i gotta say lyrically they were on the same level
lil dan came with those punch lines that kept me laughin
just taji's style is raw he flows with the beat
just loosen up in there and i think you will put out some bangers
are you workin on an album by any chance?

 

[Taj-He-Spitz]

Dan can't tell u how much he payed me but i can tell you how much i want for a verse

 

[Pak Dan]

YEPP THX FOR ALL THAT FEEDBACK.. IMMA KEEP TRYIN AND WHATNOT..

I GOT U TAJ



IM ACTUALLY OUT HERE SCOPING SOME GOOD PROFESSIONAL STUDIOS CUZ IM VACATIONING UP IN PAKISTAN RIGHT NOW L0L..

WE'LL SEE WHATS GOOD THO...




EDIT: MONTROLLER, I THOUGHT OF PUTTING OUT A MIXTAPE AT 1ST BUT EVERYBODY GOT A DAMN MIXTAPE AND SHYT SO IM THINKIN INSTEAD OF PUTTING OUT HALF-ASS SONGS ON A FREE DL MIXTAPE, IMMA JUST DO BOUT MAYBE 8 OR MORE SELECT QUALITY SHYT AND HAVE PPL DL THAT AND IMMA JUST PASS THAT SHYT AROUND.. IT'S ALL BOUT PUBLICITY FOR ME RIGHT NOW BUT IM STILL YOUNG AND I GOT MAD ROOM TO IMPROVE. CALL IT A SMALL STREET ALBUM OR AN EP OR W/E.. I JUST WANT PPL TO HAVE QUALITY SHYT FROM ME YA DIG?

BUT IMMA KEEP FUCKIN WIT IT.. GOOD LOOKS ON ALL THAT FEEDBACK

 

[ThiZZmAtiC510]

Dan can't tell u how much he payed me but i can tell you how much i want for a verse

how much?

 

[FeeMoney]

I can't help but laugh at this shit but its gettin really hard not to respect the hustle. You just sound like you're trying too hard to stay on beat. Just spit and quit puttin so much emphasis on certain words and shit. I don't come on here that often, but this is leaps and bounds better than the first shit I heard from you.

 

[Taj-He-Spitz]

500

 

[DankedOut707]

LOL

 

[underground]

hah it was a slappin ass song and it was ur best shit yet... but damn why did u pick taji for a feature. dude is shartin on you.

lol @ getting sharted on on a track

 

[Pak Dan]

THX FOR THE FEEDBACK EITHER WAY..

 

[shirmstick]

lol