I LISTENED TO THAT "POPPIN' THANg" AND DON'T TAKE THIS AS HATIN' BUT AS CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM.
51ST OF ALL,
SNUBNOZE SPOKE THE TRUTH ABOUT MARKETABILITY. YET AND STILL I PEEPED gAME FOR THE SIMPLE FACT THAT I'M gOIN' AgAINST THE gRAIN, CAUSE NIggAS IN THE HOOD AIN'T gONNA gIVE IT A CHANCE FROM JUMP BUT CLOWN.
XCONDLY,
WHAT TYPE OF AUDIENCE ARE YOU TARgETTIN'? CAUSE AgAIN, MUTHA-FUKAS THAT gREW UP ON RAP MIgHT FEEL OFFENDED OR WHAT NOT(ESPECIALLY BLAK FOLK).
THIRDLY,
THE COVER DOESN'T MATCH THE TYPE OF SOUND OR MUSIC YOU gOT. THAT POPPIN' THANg" SONg WAS AN UPTEMPO PARTY TYPE OF SONg, BUT YET AND STILL YOUR COVER PORTRAYS OR TRIES TO PORTRAY THAT YOUR MUSIC IS IN ESSENCE, DARK, gLOOMY, OR WHAT NOT.
FOURTHLY,
BY SOME OF YOUR LYRICS, YOU CAN TELL YAW SOME FOLLOWERS. YAW TALKIN' BOUT "WHIPS" REFERRIN' TO YOUR RIDE, WHEN IT'S MAINSTREAM RAP(ESPECIALLY THE EASTCOAST) THAT DOES THAT SHIT. AND YAW FROM SEATTLE SO THAT JUST TELLS ME THAT YAW AIN'T TRUE TO YAWSELFS.
FIFTHLY,
THE BEAT WASN'T MY TYPE AND IT DID SOUND KIND OF CHEEZY. BUT THE LYRICS MADE IT SOUND THAT MUCH MORE. IN SOME INSTANCES YAW KIND OF DID SOUND LIKE "gAME INSANE". YOU CAN TAKE THAT LIKE YOU WANT TO.
ALL IN ALL I WOULDN'T OF PURCHASED THIS MUSIC OR RECOMMEND IT TO N-E-ONE CAUSE MUTHA-FUKAS WOULD CLOWN ME. I'M JUST KEEPIN' IT REAL CUZZ. THIS IS THE TYPE OF MUSIC YOU MAKE FOR FAMILY AND FRIENDS CAUSE I DON'T BELIEVE YOU WILL MAKE A MINT OFF OF THIS FROM STRANgERS UNLESS YOU HELL OF COO' WITH THEM, AND EVEN THEN. TAKE THIS SHIT FOR WHAT IT IS AND UP YOUR gAME OR gET OUT. THAT'S ALL I COULD SUggEST.