"Love Letters". Serious Track (Feedback Welcome)...obviously.

[Mac Jesus]

I would take the time to redo the beat. I just ain't feeling it. But it sounds like it could be alright if you used a different beat.

 

[fillyacup]

maybe something dark and on the last verse less efx or whatever you music making people call it..break it down so the revelation is more dramatic. i agree about the twist..either way i can dig it.

 

[BIGCHILL]

this is cool i like the concept but you said the song wasnt mixed so im going by the lyrics.it would be alot better if it was more dramatic like a audio movie.

 

[Sydal]

this is cool i like the concept but you said the song wasnt mixed so im going by the lyrics.it would be alot better if it was more dramatic like a audio movie.

Didn't even cross my mind...good fuckin' idea.

 

[MRTHECOSE]

this is cool i like the concept but you said the song wasnt mixed so im going by the lyrics.it would be alot better if it was more dramatic like a audio movie.

yes^^

dope track

 

[fatman]

not bad. post the final version when you get it done.

 

[CHRISHOGGALYPSE]

I personally think this concept would've been better with a beat that was a bit quicker. A long the lines of the flow that Nas had on Ain't hard to tell or One Love. I could hear someone flowin this and it would be a lot better. For me, I'm not feelin the beat and it's a bit slow but concept is cool

 

[Mr. Nice Guy]

Good concept
Good lyrics
Good delivery
Good concept for the beat BUT the beat itself sounded real fruityloopy and amateur