"Love Letters". Serious Track (Feedback Welcome)...obviously.

[Sydal]

This song is about a dude getting wrongfully convicted of murder. He sits in prison not wanting to expose the situation, so he writes a letter detailing the truth (3rd verse) and asks his cellmate to mail it if he dies in prison.

1st Verse is a letter to his girl.
2nd Verse is a letter to his mom.
3rd Verse is a letter to everybody (sent out by his cellmate after he is killed in prison) explaining the real situation.

Not mixed and mastered yet...All feedback appreciated.

 

[fillyacup]

peepin right now, concept sounds dope..i dig the writing effects going on..

cool track

dope. third verse was on some real shit. i digg it

 

[bimmerlohver]

No.

 

[Sydal]

peepin right now, concept sounds dope..i dig the writing effects going on..

cool track

dope. third verse was on some real shit. i digg it

Thanks fam.

 

[NiNe2FiVe]

It's alright. Not really my kinda song. I liked the 2nd verse.

 

[timebomb]

naaaah needs more garlic lol just fuckin wid u ....shits ok

 

[fahrenheit]

...

 

[Simpaticone1]

I like the beat & Lyrics are cool - When its all finished it will be a solid track .

Good Job , Breh

 

[DFresh77]

t was alright...

 

[nrodgers]

not my cup of tea but lyrics were cool

 

[0R0]

Nice concept but the execution fell short. Pretty corny at times, the beat added to that. As did the writing sounds in the background. I liked what you were going for tho.

 

[Gemini]

LOL! j/k

It's coo...

 

[ALL BOUT CHICKEN]

i couldn't c-walk to this but it wasn't bad

 

[Sydal]

All good feedback IMO! Thanks for taking the time to listen to it, folks.

 

[Dhadnot]

i like live instruments but they don't sound together on this shit...this sound like some weird wu-tang type beat.

get another beat it'll sound much better.

 

[Sydal]

i like live instruments but they don't sound together on this shit...

What do you mean?

 

[Dhadnot]

i guess the mixing, im no expert but they sound like spaced apart like when you hear a band play at a bar or small venue.

 

[Sydal]

i guess the mixing, im no expert but they sound like spaced apart like when you hear a band play at a bar or small venue.

Yea I hear ya. We're going to tighten it up a bit...

 

[Count_Slapula]

Cool track..would like to hear a twist at the end or something to make it more interesting..

 

[Sydal]

Cool track..would like to hear a twist at the end or something to make it more interesting..

I hear ya. Thanks fam.