in it to win

[thatguy]

Actually, you're supposed to emphasize in the main vocals. It'll sound ridiculous if you just do voice-overs with emphasis and the main vocal audio has none. It'll be too obvious.


The thing about rap is, nobody cares what you have to say if your rhymes aren't appealing enough for them to continue listening. I thought your rhymes were OK, but not good enough for me to want to get a hold of any of your other music. They were just good enough to keep me interested in this particular piece. There are rappers that I think are decent rappers, but I would never buy material from them. See what I'm saying?

well i know they have to be appealing to a point, thats why they are not all one syllable, im just sayin, i aint gon go super lyrical on a deep track ya feel me? its easier to say what im really tryin to say with out tryin to throw in big ass words, with lots of multis and other things, like i said, youll get to see the lyrical side of me soon enough.

 

[thatguy]

family,

the hook is cool. put same energy into rest of track.

peace.




good feedback y'all

yea, i redid it a little, sounds way better, once im done ill post another version version