HERE IT IS. I HOPE Y'ALL LIKE IT

[H2O04]

i peeped it & the quality is good & all, but you do need to SPEAK UP....ya dig? i mean its hard to understand you because you have metal in ya mouth, but with practice you can speak around the braces...look at Tall T for instance...yea he lisp sumtimes but he knows how to rap around em. things you need are, ENERGY, you need to make em wanna jus vibe to ya track...TIMING, you need to make sure your on beat, thas the number one thing u need to work on. if you off beat it throws off the head noddin, gets all jumbled up. CONFIDENCE, yea need to think u tha shyt...thurrs many other things but start with that for now...aight? next time you come through the studio, we gon make it right.

oh an i still think "Pakistan Dan The Taliban Man" goes to work! hahaha. peace bruh.

Yall Check Out My Space...http://www.myspace.com/h2oskingdom

H2O
Empire Worldwide Ent.

 

[GTDProductions]

quit bein fake is your first start..

 

[Pak Dan]

fosho man fosho. im hyped to get my 2nd one recorded.

i'll work as hard as i can in perfectin my 2nd one. this'll be real no doubt its about something else.

i rly appreciate all this feedback. keep em coming.

 

[Pak Dan]

see the thing is..talk about the real shit you do..quit talkin bout u a warrior, and gloccs, cause someone gonna checc you one day, and your gonna freeze the fucc up.. be real bro

good look. thing is, i was just feeling a lot goin thru my head at the time bout this one dude and i was just somewhat heated so plz excuse the fakeness

 

[LurccH918]

for some reason i cant hear peoples myspace music, anyone no what the fuck the deal is???

 

[Masked Lemon]

You need to rap about smashing through fences and benchpressing.



Drop my name in your next song, and you'll instantly get double the listens.

 

[Pak Dan]

lurch~
my page has a flash layout. dono if thats the problem.

 

[LurccH918]

my page has a flash layout. that could be a problem.

i gotta DL flash player???

 

[Pak Dan]

umm honestly i dono lurch. can u hear other artist's music or u just cant hear mine?

 

[LurccH918]

umm honestly i dono lurch. can u hear other artist's music or u just cant hear mine?

other peoples too

 

[GTDProductions]

good look. thing is, i was just feeling a lot goin thru my head at the time bout this one dude and i was just somewhat heated so plz excuse the fakeness

fight the dude then u got somthin to rap about..

 

[Pak Dan]

hmm. yea sure try dling flash player








also, i didnt cuss in this one cuz since it was my 1st recorded song, my rents were buggin me bout dat shit

 

[LurccH918]

it got it now, yeah u was ok lil homie, i heard worse than this before, but yeah u need to get hyped a lil bit and speak more clearly, but it wasnt that bad

 

[H2O04]

ayo lurch, you got high speed internet? cuz if u got dial up, it wont play

 

[LurccH918]

ayo lurch, you got high speed internet? cuz if u got dial up, it wont play

yeah i got high speed cable, i just had to DL flash, it thought i already had thats why i was trippin about it not workin, good lookin though

 

[Flo-istic]

Keep at it...a nice flow with confidence on the mic doesn't come over night, it takes A LOT of practice...trying new things, listening to what people say, and actually having the heart to want to do this music thing...if you love music your unique style and creativity will eventually shine through...i am by no means a great rapper...BUT i enjoy what i do regardless of what people say and i make my music for myself and those that support me...so keep at it!

 

[Jack Tracks]

the nancy sinatra sample was dope.. i couldnt really understand what you were saying

 

[Pak Dan]

thanks a lot flo istic. truth is, i rly got love for this and imma work at gettin my shit 2gether.


imo, it sounds better thru headphones.

if u guys want, i'll post da lyrics 2mmoro.



thx jack tracks, i thought so too




keep em comin and appreciate y'all takin da time for this..

 

[BASEDVATO]

you dont look built for rap yet... if you acten insecure like dis

how you gonna ask a bunch of no one, on the world wide web... to give you a name?

and the song is garbage cause its obviously your first one... do 500 more, get some swag - then post for us

thx u

 

[NiNe2FiVe]

ATTA BOY DAN!!! THAT WASNT HALF BAD BRO, THE BEAT WAS COOL AND THE CHORUS WAS DOPE, JUST WHAT EVERYONE SAID, SPEAK CLEARLY AND SPIT THAT SHIT OUT WITH A LITTLE INSTENSITY AND YOUR SHITTIN ON 75% OF THE RAPPERS ON THE SICCNESS, WAY TO SACK UP AND PUT THE SINGLE UP ON THE SITE, GOOD JOB BRO