The beat is good....the chorus is 'aight.....the free style needs ta gooooooo!!!! What the fuck is a castle around a heart, dude!!! How about, "tears keep falling from the souls....or eyes..." Since when does a castle, even metaphorically, cry tears?
Chrissy Pizzi 3 days ago
man ur rigid as fuck. expand yo mind. escape basicizms.
letsgobigblue in reply to Chrissy Pizzi 3 days ago
Sweetie, already done escaped basicizms. Rigid? Yes....just my opinion. This shit would be brutally sick if it wasn't for that one shit-ass line. I'm just sayin'....if he changed the metaphor, I might listen more.
Chrissy Pizzi in reply to letsgobigblue 2 days ago
it's not a metaphor it's a beautifully illustrative illusion that leaves itself open to interpretation. personally i consider it thusly: my heart is noble, royal, rich. but it's experienced so much negativity that it's cried enough tears to create a protective liquid barrier against intruders wishing harm upon it, much like a moat is a protective liquid barrier protecting it from horse-backed intruders, thereby my heart is a castle, and it's tears are a moat keeping haters on the nether regions.
letsgobigblue in reply to Chrissy Pizzi 1 day ago
lol