Ur flow wasnt too bad , just sounded real off beat, but my first material sounds way worst, I say if music is what u want to pursue then go 4 it , every one gotta have a dream.
Let me see what you look like rapping this you might have what it takes bro
Lil more practice and lyrical arrangement and delivery and you can do it but we got to see what you look like bro
Just get a camera and practice your verse and let see if you got the look
Before you start wasting you're money ..
I did like the beat
I'm looking to do a whole oldies remix fir my next album
Even if the rapping thing doesnt go my way, i will most likely still pursue a career in producing, but I'll send a video your way next time I start working on a new lil project.