DO YOU MAKE MUSIC?
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finnally a good thread
my homies music page, he has sampled beats for now, but check him out.
If you wanna listen to one track, i would say "no love" its tight.
any feedback to the homie, good or bad would be appreciated.
finnally a good thread
my homies music page, he has sampled beats for now, but check him out.
If you wanna listen to one track, i would say "no love" its tight.
any feedback to the homie, good or bad would be appreciated.
Ill give some constructive criticism, I started off wit the homie Ru's music.
Big Ru
ready 4 wateva - beat slapped, flow is amateurish, levels on the voice isnt polished
4 the homegirlz - great concept, flow needs to to be on one level, bars are too fast, this song would sound sick screwed, slow the rap down.
on the westside - beat is hard, dark n grimey, song would sound sick with that added vocals sound on all the verses.
XIV til Im Gone - you ripped the first bar, the beat sounds too low
by any means - beat slapps, first bar is fire, the production on this one is clean.
Rep that 510 - Concept is sick, Anything that reps the lower bottoms of the 510 im with it. 2nd, 3rd (came with it) verses is fire.
Keep up the Good work man, I would say work on your sound vocally, your ear for picking out beats is topnotch, but vocally its gotta be at a superior level to compliment the whole theme of your intellect. I know most of your tracks werent mastered and whatnot but the vocals gotta be upto par to make your fans want to keep hearing your music....
I'll get around to hear everyones music and give ya'll an honest opinion as best as I could, I have a high standard as far as sound, just as the next person. I just want every artist to put out good quality music. Its gotta be its very best otherwise its gonna be downwashed with the rest of the music thats being put out that'll most likely end up in a used section of a music store....
Big Ru
ready 4 wateva - beat slapped, flow is amateurish, levels on the voice isnt polished
4 the homegirlz - great concept, flow needs to to be on one level, bars are too fast, this song would sound sick screwed, slow the rap down.
on the westside - beat is hard, dark n grimey, song would sound sick with that added vocals sound on all the verses.
XIV til Im Gone - you ripped the first bar, the beat sounds too low
by any means - beat slapps, first bar is fire, the production on this one is clean.
Rep that 510 - Concept is sick, Anything that reps the lower bottoms of the 510 im with it. 2nd, 3rd (came with it) verses is fire.
Keep up the Good work man, I would say work on your sound vocally, your ear for picking out beats is topnotch, but vocally its gotta be at a superior level to compliment the whole theme of your intellect. I know most of your tracks werent mastered and whatnot but the vocals gotta be upto par to make your fans want to keep hearing your music....
I'll get around to hear everyones music and give ya'll an honest opinion as best as I could, I have a high standard as far as sound, just as the next person. I just want every artist to put out good quality music. Its gotta be its very best otherwise its gonna be downwashed with the rest of the music thats being put out that'll most likely end up in a used section of a music store....
-i listend to one random track -
lil loc: i was feelin the flow, i listened to the boss remix, feelin the flow keep it up
ecose: calizona connect, i didnt like the way the first dude flowed, not enough emotion into it, sounds like you bored and just talking and ryming, the second dude was ok
troll: real shit: damn the first verse came hard as fuck, feelin the fuck outta that real shit fa sho. just didnt like the hook could been better 4 tha track n beat cuz they was off the hook, i idnt really like the 3rd dude wasnt feelin the flow
mastermind: the beat was sick, the last lil thing u did finished it off nicely
big ru: on xiv till im gone: you could improve your lyrics, not really cat hat fat raps, but u can really tell wat ur bout too say, but pretty good flow
2 sav: damn!!! feelin tuck ya rag, badd ass beat, nice as flow, tight ass concept. only thing sav it out, 2 sav hmmm antioch? quit bitein big tone. naw just playin coo shit tho
trajik 1: rock bottom: some anger up in that one, i was feelin it, tight flow beat was sick some known features on some of ur tracks wud be sick
lil loc: i was feelin the flow, i listened to the boss remix, feelin the flow keep it up
ecose: calizona connect, i didnt like the way the first dude flowed, not enough emotion into it, sounds like you bored and just talking and ryming, the second dude was ok
troll: real shit: damn the first verse came hard as fuck, feelin the fuck outta that real shit fa sho. just didnt like the hook could been better 4 tha track n beat cuz they was off the hook, i idnt really like the 3rd dude wasnt feelin the flow
mastermind: the beat was sick, the last lil thing u did finished it off nicely
big ru: on xiv till im gone: you could improve your lyrics, not really cat hat fat raps, but u can really tell wat ur bout too say, but pretty good flow
2 sav: damn!!! feelin tuck ya rag, badd ass beat, nice as flow, tight ass concept. only thing sav it out, 2 sav hmmm antioch? quit bitein big tone. naw just playin coo shit tho
trajik 1: rock bottom: some anger up in that one, i was feelin it, tight flow beat was sick some known features on some of ur tracks wud be sick
check the sig. 
Im gona be postin more tracks as soon as they are finished being mastered.
Im gona be postin more tracks as soon as they are finished being mastered.
I agree with Dana Dane's fantasy about the beats! The only beats that actually made me nod my head up and down were "What U Say" and "Calizona
Connect"(This one being my fav track)...... I'm feelin the style and delivery. Coo shit tho pimpin keep up the good and keep puttin it down for the Shark Town homie!
Connect"(This one being my fav track)...... I'm feelin the style and delivery. Coo shit tho pimpin keep up the good and keep puttin it down for the Shark Town homie!
HAHAHAHA "No Love" was off the hook! Dope cut homie..... I started laughing when you said Norteno Jalapeno! "Diablo City" is a hardcore rolla with straight gangsta shit and the beat is bangin the ONLY prob I had was the last dude rapping(He kind of killed it). "Life Ain't Right" sounds like you did it over the phone not feeling it that much cuz its hard to hear. Keep it up tho!
I like how they flipped the sample on the "Attitude" track..... Gives it a summertime feel! The "So Sweet" beat is dope ass fuck and all of you guys mesh together like Voltron, the only thing I ain't feelin too much is the chorus IMO. "Take My Word" is slumpin as well. Keep workin hard and take that San Jo 408 shit to the rack on these beezies!