Wow...
First of all, as an unbiased 'spectator'...let me start off by saying the man love in here is overwhelming. No homo...err...I guess it would be yes homo.
Brown Boy's verse was very, very simple. blah blah blah boy blah blah blah toy...that's what it sounded like to me.
Commando's was more advanced...but didn't mesh well. It was hard get a feel for the flow...you should punctuate it more clearly.
I'd say this should be tossed out...and a REAL battle should be made up.
16 bars, no more and no less. 2 rounds.
Someone BESIDES the people who's posted in here already vote.
It's not that hard, folks...