BRAND NEW TRACK UP!!!![PRODUCED BY INDECENT THA SLAPMASTER]

[lopro]

you just gotta work on ur delivery and pronunciation. if u got braces i can understand the lisp kinda but the r's are pronounced as w's from wut i heard. keep doin your thing the time will come if u continue to work hard.

 

[Pak Dan]

http://www.suicidepreventioncenter.org/

No hate here lil Dan, but maybe you need to talk to someone.

And if anyone thinks I'm trying to be funny about this shit FUCK YOU!

lol i aint comitting suicide



thx for tha feedback lilrogue

 

[TRAJIK1]

Lil Dan? Kill homself? he's to crazy for that! I wanna hear this Tommy James/Lil' Dan Collabo

 

[Reegz]

i wrote this shit when some of my homeboys disrespected me and how i dont kick it w/ em no more

 

[Stimey]

^^^hahahahaaa

 

[lopro]

LMAO i was dying wen i saw that.

 

[ThiZZmAtiC510]

lmfao!!! that was my reaction too!! hahahahahahahahhaha

 

[monsta dollas]

aye reegz check out mah soundclick, see if u like any beats. you should rock one of em, lemme know if u feelin any one ill shoot it too u.

soundclick.com/monstadollas

 

[707north]

needs alot of work keep it up homie.

 

[BAYTION WIDE]

lol.

 

[Pak Dan]

LMAO

hahahahha

 

[BASEDVATO]

When I was 16 my skills was way off, I think around 22 I Developed a flow, and steady got good at word play... Now I'm 25, and feel I can shit on most emcee's with the ease (imo)


Basically just keep at it, none of these songs will really stand the test of time for you, cause you gonna keep getting better...


Get a rap coach j/k

 

[Pak Dan]

yea thx


they're some haters on da space and where i live still tryin 2 put me down but imma keep doin what i do.. i can only get better


and they're some feelin it a lot.. some ppl day its da best 1 i got so far...

 

[Pak Dan]

bumpp

 

[DJ Coma]

Thanks for the new quote for my signature

 

[9800REPRASENTA]

YOU FUKIN SUCK NIGGA FUCK YO SONG AND FUCK WHUT YOU FEELIN NIGGGAAAAAA










































LMAO J/P NIGGA KEEP DOIN YA THANG

 

[chris capo]

LOL u shouldnt bother coppin beats for $250 jus use mixtape beats till u learn how to rap

 

[Stimey]

^^^yesssss

 

[lopro]

im guessing it was one of indecent free beat giveaways form a while back.. doubt he spent some money on that.

 

[mouth_my_nuts]

which one is the new track, the smoke song?

Thats a tight beat, old 3-6 song "late night tip"