BRAND NEW TRACK UP!!!![PRODUCED BY INDECENT THA SLAPMASTER]

[Pak Dan]

I HOPE Y'ALL LIKE IT... I WORKED HARD ON THIS ONE..



EVEN IF ITS FOR MIXTAPE PURPOSES, I GOTTA GIVE INDECENT CREDIT FOR PRODUCING IT.. A LOTTA PPL WERE FEELING THA BEAT..



FEEDBACK IS ALWAYS WELCOMED...




PEACE!



HTTP://MYSPACE.COM/ITZLILDAN

 

[Pak Dan]

lemme kno if y'all like it..




g'nite!

 

[TheBayMusic]

indo got blappers

yee wuts good cutt

 

[TOMMYJAMES]

LMAO

*i come around and they think its a bomb threat*

i want do a song with you hit me on myspace lil dan.

 

[Pak Dan]

THANKS FOR THA FEEDBACK


I APPRECIATE THAT NOTE INDECENT.. IM STILL WORKIN ON IT 2 GET BETTER...




KEEP EM COMIN!

 

[DAT NIGGA TAZZ]

youve came a long... u still got alot of shit to improve. ur delivery got a lil better, ur lyrics are better. but u need to pronounce ur words,

when do u get them braces off i think thats wut it is

 

[Pak Dan]

can u tell tha difference between the verses cuz when i was doing my 2nd and 3rd verse, i had just gotten my braces tightened and they was hurtin a lot


yea thx for tha feedback

 

[BASEDVATO]

Lil Dan your crazy... just keep making songs

how old are you?



just rap somthing thats relevent to you, not about weapons and 4-5... you dont do that shit

rap about fucken slutty high school girls, lunch break blunt sessions and buyen clothes at valley fair or eastridge...

 

[Stimey]

can u tell tha difference between the verses cuz when i was doing my 2nd and 3rd verse, i had just gotten my braces tightened and they was hurtin a lot

haha

 

[Uzzle]

That beat was dope, Keep at it Lil dan.

 

[DoucheBagFresh]

can u tell tha difference between the verses cuz when i was doing my 2nd and 3rd verse, i had just gotten my braces tightened and they was hurtin a lot


yea thx for tha feedback

lmao your so sqaure its ok....lil dan please refrain from talkin bout any 'weapons' homie you aint bout shit,this track is hella emo like how hard can your life be your a spoiled rich arab

 

[AllCityDAO]

SCHUPER SHICK

 

[second650]

keep it up lil dan....

 

[edurling1]

thanks for this

 

[FDS]

keep it at man, i would reccomend to improve your delivery/timing meaning try not to sound like ur reading it off a peice of paper.

 

[FDS]

we should make a siccness track. i got a few bars for these cats.

 

[GasChamber707]

http://www.suicidepreventioncenter.org/

No hate here lil Dan, but maybe you need to talk to someone.

And if anyone thinks I'm trying to be funny about this shit FUCK YOU!

 

[Pak Dan]

lmao your so sqaure its ok....lil dan please refrain from talkin bout any 'weapons' homie you aint bout shit,this track is hella emo like how hard can your life be your a spoiled rich arab

lol i aint that rich..



an i wrote this shit when some of my homeboys disrespected me and how i dont kick it w/ em no more.. thats all



N JAIL, im 16

 

[Pak Dan]

keep it at man, i would reccomend to improve your delivery/timing meaning try not to sound like ur reading it off a peice of paper.

i been workin on that, believe me

 

[Pak Dan]

Lil Dan your crazy... just keep making songs

how old are you?



just rap somthing thats relevent to you, not about weapons and 4-5... you dont do that shit

rap about fucken slutty high school girls, lunch break blunt sessions and buyen clothes at valley fair or eastridge...

lmao im in da bay right now and imma be at valley fair on friday hahaha