Bay Recovery Movement

[Nobody's Biz]

You all some selfish mothefukkas fukkin up this thread wit some unrapping bullshit. If yo shit is now cleared from the air, can ya''ll spare us the long-winded details cuz the smell is gettin to me and I ain't got a match. Let's all stop & smell da roses without the morose prose bullshit. (And ya'll were "cringing" at me being wordy-- Yaw just can't stop trying to do me dirty)

 

[Nobody's Biz]

You all some selfish mothefukkas fukkin up this thread wit some unrapping bullshit. If yo shit is now cleared from the air, can ya''ll spare us the long-winded details cuz the smell is gettin to me and I ain't got a match. Let's all stop & smell da roses without the morose prose bullshit. (And ya'll were "cringing" at me being wordy-- Yaw just can't stop trying to do me dirty)

And don't get all butt hurt by how I worded this-- I juss don't like to see all you homiez so serious.

PLAY BALL YA'LL!!

 

[Dizz]

Fuck it I dont give a fuck who beefin/ ima spit rhymes all yall can keep dreamin/ it aint rocket science its just kel versus keenan/ im keen N/ my mind im still in my prime/ just a young homie who be tryin to hit rhymes/ find studio time/ and drop shit on wax/ am i serious? like fuckin heart attacks/ ima ignore the bore/ long scores/ of more/ beef and more/ reef to calm me as i drive these streets/ listenin to some beats/ It aint a dream/ I dream/ reppin the 14/ and knockin on kats who shoulda never been/ But until then/ I got my paper and pen/ countin the days till I see my girl again/ But until then I stay focused, drop hits and pray/ rappin fo my homies while beefs makin this shit gay/

 

[YOUNG BREW]

LOLOLOLOL@ THIS IS THE "MOST HEATED THREAD"..HAHA


I NEVER NEW FOOLS TOOK SO MUCH PRIDE IN THERE POSTS...SOME NET NERDS NEVER LEARN

 

[Dizz]

I often got demonic capabilities/ leave you in scars and demonic disabilities/ the ability/ i got the agility/ yo hatin is growin like outta fertility/ yall cant control shit/ i roll shit/ itz all about the raiders in the super bowl, shit/ mothafuckas fuck you up/ homie fuck the bucs/ you fuckin wit da rawk/ get dumped up/ dump trucks/ dumb fucks fucked up/ Where all the flows at/ Askin like where the hoes at/ they everywhere, been rappin thru half this thread/ you shit out of luck bitch/ i dont give a fuck bitch/ Dizz got the comeback/ so run back/ bitch


ok that was kinda weak... but more to come soon...

 

[Nobody's Biz]

These nightmares infesting my brain with a siccness
I ain't splattering guts on the pavement so witnesses
come testify claiming that sins of omission
Are any part of my eternal soul's vision, or
Predict infidelity, weakness or shame, cuz
there's nobody else deep as me up in the game
Started before most ya'll even been born
The sins of my father blow Gabriel's horn
Not angel nor devil cuz it all comes to pain
When broken to elements one and the same
All fibers and filaments ground into dust
Rebuilding this empire up from the rust
And ashes from cycles of wars never ending
These nuclear particles splitting then mending
My thermodynamic verbosity flaming
Blowing through hurricanes well beyond naming
The fabric of life partly real part a shadow
I still live MY life with or without your battle.
Iam coming up roses Iam coming up steel
Pressed coal into diamonds still rough to the feel
I been through the swastikas, been through your noose
I been down your chimneys and out your caboose
Medieval reactors brand chemical burns
Indelible engrams eat diets of worms
Canonical lyrics bring darkness to light
You monks and you druids can't bait me to fight
With broadcasted psychospeak lethal as pistols
Aim transmissions splashed through brain radio crystals
The woof, weave, and warp of the wave of my consience
Has nothing to do with your static long gone since
That shaking and quakin quit testing my nerves
Got bored with that drama, there's no point it serves
Ain't nothing I can't face ain't nothing not done
If you think you'll find better you can't be my one
Got wolves howling nightly and sharks cutting teeth
Got enemies hiding from what lies beneath
That splinter cell fingerprints too much to bear
like DNA evidence sprung from nowhere
Got nothing to gain here cuz nothing's for sale
I ain't got no business in telling this tale
I'm up late at night thinking bout days long past
And talking myself out of whipping some ass
Cuz the lessons I've learned are what still prolly saves me
And I thank all my homies who took time to raise me

Aight Imma be hella selfish and re-post this thang I wrote back on page dirteen cuz none of ya'll took some time to stop & comment on it, and wherther it more or less sounded good or bad to you. I think it's the best I've done & I was really feelin it. Iam wonderin if a few of you can give me some stylistic impressions. Is this really coo sounding to your ear or am I all fake & kidding myself?

I don't usually give a flying rats ass fuck what anybody thinks, but I'd like to see this thread evolve into some serious professionalish critiqing so we can all develop the extraordinary talent we all coming wit. Who's wit me?

 

[YOUNG BREW]

good rhyme scheme..but too many scientific words for my taste

 

[Nobody's Biz]

I was thinking that too-- Verbal pretentiousness is pretty fuckin gay. I guess I better toughen up & drop the "SAT" words like Vamps said, cuz I forgot what half this shit meant already & I lost my thesaurus.

 

[Kidd North]

STOP letz just flo/forget deez problemz & smoke sum dro/Iam just a Kidd 15 yearz of age/robbin tha 7-11 wit a 12 gage/14 sawed off/body going ta be haled off/cuz Iam a Killer. In. A. Deadly. Descise./ & watch out yall Felonz r on tha riase/so close ur eye’z & cover ur earz/fucken wit me iz like what what happenz when u breaken mirrorz/ but I give yall 14 yearz/of bad luck/best duck/when u see tha red truck/cuz I shootin cuz I don’t give a fuck/ Iam to drunk but Iam N class/yall don’t like it kiss my ass/suck my dick & lick my nutz/step up ta Woodie get treated like slutz/but Ill kill u no if, &z, or buttz/or any kind of expectionz/cuz I sendin yall derectionz/so u can go to hell/Iam larger than life like a Killer whale/

 

[RIX]

AIGHT CHRISDOGG AND MTOWN ALL I GOTTA SAY IS FUCK YA'LL, I'LL DO YA'LL NIGGAS A FAVOR AND IMMA STOP RAPPIN ON THIS THREAD, TO EVERYONE WHO IS RAPPIN N SHIT, KEEP DOIN IT, AND KEEP IT ALIVE...

I HEARD FRUM CHRIS DOGG, MTOWN, AND A FEW OTHER HATERS THAT... I GOT NOTHIN TO RAP ABOUT, SO IMMA KEEP MY SHIT INSIDE, AND I AINT GON RAP HERE NO MO, JUSS ON PAPER, FUCK YA'LL HATERS, FRUM NOW ON RIX BEEN SOLO.....

I AINT GOIN OUT LIKE A BITCH EITHER, IMMA JUSS LISTEN TO WHAT YA'LL GOTTA SAY, WE'LL SEE THO
BUT UNTIL THEN BALHEADRIX GON RAP WIT A PEN AND PAPER, FUCK THA BAY RECOVERY MOVEMENT, IMMA MAKE A SONG ABOUT IT, AND YA'LL KNOW THO, IM THA FOUNDER N SHIT, FUCK IT THO, KEEP IT ALIVE, IM OUT.....

 

[JIM HAT]

Should this thread just be closed?

 

[Dizz]

nah dont close it... homies wanna rap up here, it shouldnt be closed cuz a few people beefin

 

[YOUNG BREW]

LMAO @ FUCK US HATERS...MAN U GOT A LOT OF GROWIN UP TO DO IF THIS IS HOW YOU REACT TO SOME CRITICISM..U AINT SEEN ME OR CHRIS START WHINING LIKE LIL FUCKIN KIDS WHEN U SPEAK ON US

AND DAMN..HOW U GONNA TAKE SO MUCH PRIDE IN A FUCKIN THREAD?..SHIT AINT THAT SERIOUS..PLUS..THIS A GAY ASS THREAD ANYWAYS..WHEN I SEEN THE TITLE I HAD NO CLUE IT WAZ A BUNCH OF FOOLS FLOWIN OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AGAIN....

U GO DO THAT..GO MAKE THEM HITS U "DANGEROUS NIGGA" YOU...AND SEND A LIL "FUCK YOU" TO Young Brew WHEN U DO!

IM OUT THIS BATCH

 

[Dizz]

i dont think its a gay ass thread... its only gay is kats go off topic and make it gay.. theres places to do that other shit, but this thread was made for rappin... and i noe someones prob thinking we should give up this online flowin and drop shit on wax, but not everyone got the opportunities or money to make CDs or rap in public, so we do it on here for the fuck of it, to have a good time and maybe get some feedback on it..

 

[JIM HAT]

theres places to do that other shit

There is also places to do this "shit" ... Maybe the Flows Forum?

 

[YOUNG BREW]

THATS ALL I FINE AND DANDY..BUT SEE..THERES A FORUM FOR THIS SHIT..AND IF YALL LIKE TO "TYPE RHYME" SO MUCH TAKE THE SHIT OVER THERE AND FUCK WITH SOME FOLKS WHO WILL GIVE YOU THE FEEDBACK YOU LOOKIN FOR

EITHER THAT OR RECORD THIS SHIT ON AUDIO AND POST IT UP TO PROVE U CAN ACTUALLY SPIT WHAT YOUR TYPING

 

[Dizz]

no offense but it kinda sound like u takin sides on this issue... i dont noe if u a moderator or whatever but in that position you cant do what you or ur homies want based on your interests.. rite now its too early to decide whether this thread should be closed cuz only a few kats have voiced their opinion of it... yea we can rap on the flows forum but we can always rap here.. if it was gonna be closed it would've been a long time when it first opened... it dont gotta take some fuckin beef to get it shut down... if kats dont wanna read it, they dont got to.. theres other threads on this board too...

 

[RIX]

I AINT WHININ AIGHT NIGGA

IM JUST SAYIN, IM TAKIN THA CRITICISM QUITE WELL, IF YA'L DONT WANNA SEE ME RAP, I WONT LET U SEE ME, THASS ALL IM SAYIN, QUIT CONTRADICTIN A NIGGA, AND MAKIN HIM HAVE TO KEEP SAYIN SHIT to defend my position, either dont read my shit, or imma just keep to myself aight
dont speak on me no mo

 

[JIM HAT]

@ Dizz..
I NEVER once said i was going to close this, Just brought it up.. Hearing peoples thoughts..And proving to you that there is a place for this.

 

[YOUNG BREW]

@RIX...EXPLAIN HOW IM CONTRADICTING YOU..IF U KNOW WHAT THAT WORD MEANS..OH AND I GIVE A FUCK IF U DONT LET ME SEE YOU RAP..IM NOT LOSIN ANY SLEEP OVER IT

@DIZZ....DONT U THINK THERE COMES A TIME WHEN A POST SHOULD END,..LIKE NEAR THE 1000 MARK..ESPECIALLY WHEN ITS THE SAME PEOPLE POSTING IN ROTATION..I MEAN YALL COULD DO THIS THREW EMAILS..FLOWS FORUM..BATTLE FORUM..OR WHATEVER THE FUCK

@JIM HAT-MY VOTE GOES TO CLOSIN THIS SHIT