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Nobody's Biz

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Nov 27, 2002
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I dunno. I felt like being a dick cuz I couldn't believe this guy seriously can't understand my rap on page one of this thread. It looks as clear cut as Lorena Bobbit's rage to me.

This is my rap that Kp is questioning from page one of this whole dang thread, days ago...


"redrum

44 flow

Young, dumb, full of cum/ Gotta pocket fulla doe, so you gonna get some/ but who the fuk told
you you're the only one? / You slap a sluts ass like a big bass drum/then try to bring it home
like you ain't a sorry bum/ you acting like a baby still suckin on his thumb/ cryin in the corner
when you find your wife's gone/ take a look around before you think she's done/ cuz she pac'd
up all your shit and ran off with your son/ Her lipstick on the mirror readin "Did ya have fun?,"/
She even took your pistol 'for she headed on the run/ and though you planned ahead for this
you'll miss your honeybun/ when your homie sprays her face with lead before the day is done/
fuckkn her dead carcass like Attila the hun/ so instead of showing love you give the next hoe
none/ Just smiling like a psycho screaming "Red-rum! Red-rum!"

I got to grant Kp that's not my best work and isn't as clear as it could have been... I was fresh to flow writin here then. Is this bad work and hopelessly unclear to the rest of ya'll?
I know what I mean when Iam writing cuz I can see it, but as others have told me, they hear me saying "the wheels are strange in the fall" What fucking wheels?
 
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Nobody's Biz

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Nov 27, 2002
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I was gonna write a flow to show a homie goin through it he'll pull through it but now I don't know.... cuz it's too serious. One thang's for sho he blew it for real that man with aluminum wheels is flat on his back wit another heart attack and I'd be madder than heck if I didn't respect that's how he wants it countin his last days in his own Hawaiian ways and not affected with dreams of resurrected fiending schemes. I can't really see saying R.I.P. when he ain't dead yet, but he'll get there soon and Iam a lunatic for missing what doesnt want to stay and he didn't try to stop what was rotting him away every day. He'll be gettin his way, nothing gets in his way, he'll get away, I wish I had something better to say. If you live this time Imma show you this rhyme and fo sho this will be this last time you'll find my mind bein kind. Aloha homie get yoself up mothafuckker.
 
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Kp

Sicc OG
#826
Oct 29, 2002
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Re: Re: Re: redrum

Nobody's Biz said:



Translation for the hopelessly unstreetwise....

You are young, dumb, and horny, with a pocket full of money so you are going to go out and get laid (presumably by courting a lady who is not your girlfriend or wife, and who may actually be a paid prostitute, although the assumption is left for the reader to make based on personal whim, expectation, or experience.) The rest of that particular rap goes on to explain how the jilted wife tries to take revenge by leaving with the kids and writing "Did you have fun" in lipstick on the mirror.... you get the idea.. If you are going to ask everyone for minute explanations about information that is meant to be inferred by the reader according to allusions within the text, perhaps rap is not the best subject for you. Much of rap is left to the readers imagination, and like the poetry of the bards from days of old, formulates complex ideas and stirs riviting emotions and much gnashing of teeth while leaving finer points to ones curious and imaginative wonderings. Still, if you harbor a real inquistitive passion for this meaningful and life-changing work, indeed we welcome your thought provoking questions and your enthusiastic input, and we will reserve a place for you at our table. Come join us, my friend. :)
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Come on dogg. What are you trying to do? Question my intellect? Please homie, you're not on my level. Not rapping, not intellectually, not anything. Unstreetwise? Is that even a fucking word? So since I'm not from the streets, and you are, then I'm sure you could school me to the game. Haha. You need to think before you act. You don't know me or what I'm about so before you jump the gun, why don't you be a little more mature. I wasn't trying to make you look bad, I was questioning that line. It didn't make sense then and it doesn't make sense now, even after you horrible attempt to lace folks with your words like "jilted". Did you run a thesaurus through your shit in Word after you wrote that crock of shit? And to set the record straight, you get hookers? So you are saying, after allllll that bullshit, that it was about a hooker? If you're young you need to be out getting laid for free homie. It'd be dfferent if you were an old man. Damn, you just make yourself look more and more like an idiot.

Kp
 
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Nobody's Biz

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#828
Nov 27, 2002
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Re: one more thing

@Kp

Kp said:
I didn't want to make this a fucking debate. You started this, and I am ending it, so squash it right here.
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It's squashed, homeboy. I thought you were clowning me, so I clowned you right back. My bad.

Still if you take a look at my rap when you're not high, you'll see the whole rap is a story addressed to a fictional "you" who is cheating on his wife and what happens to both of them. It has nothing to do with me or you hiring hookers, or value judgements, or whether I would spend my funds on them rather than on Taco Bell.

I have nothing against hookers per se. A hooker is not the same thing as a "hoe." Any fucked up bitch or slut can be a called a filthy "hoe," regardless of how they earn money. This rap was about a guy cheating on his wife. Who cares about the hooker? A lot of "hookers" are actually pulling their own weight in a legitimate business and being loyal to their moral standards by not using other people with false promises like a lover who cheats, but offering a business service and supporting themselves, even tho it robs them of their own social standing in the community and puts their lives and happiness at risk. It was one of my first raps, homeboy, and not directed at being judgemental to anyone specifically, just putting out a gangsta style flow about fictional consequences to a playa and the wife who took off with his son. Let's save explanations for PMs tho, cuz I'd like to see people keep dropping raps, including you.

I see you got something going on wit A-Wax, so you prolly have some good shit that everybuddy here would be honored to peep. Spit it, homie.
 
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Nobody's Biz

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Nov 27, 2002
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@Kp

Rix comin hard/ through this yard/ and we still waitin/ anticipatin/ what this Kp cat gonna stack/ up as his battle rap./ We never had noone with so much trouble understanding/ these rhymes we been handing /back and forth/ so be a good sport/ and spit /us some shit/ so we can speak on it /like we mature.../ you sure/ you wanna do/ this Kp/ or are you/ just frontin' me?/ Thought you was the mac/ cuz yaw spitting wit A-wax,/ but did ya just hire/ him tryin to spit fire/ like him so peeps would admire/ you like him?/ Don't spread yoself thin/ here, boy, /bring somefin in/ cuz we want to enjoy/ it or destroy /it, or enjoy destroying/ it if we can't go/ for what a boring moron/ drops on the floor. / What you waiting for?/ Spit/ some shit/ or don't criticize it./ Kp,/ we just wanna see /if you really wanna be/ a OG /or just another sting once bumble bee. /You feelin me?/ Give us your most /or get ghost.
 
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Nobody's Biz

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Nov 27, 2002
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Hat--Come on, I am inviting him to battle rap and share his talent. The anger is squashed, but not the sincere request for him to try to participate in and add to the character of the thread he's criticizing.

If I were really mad you know I wouldn't be giving it any artistic attention. I'd be deviously plotting, and when he least expects it creeping up behind him unnoticed until his screams pierce the midnight silence, not coming at him here with battle bait. Whatever. Can't we all just shoot some battle shit without people thinking it's not a verbal game? Everybody here is creating!!!!
 
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Dizz

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Aug 29, 2002
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Fuck these past couple of posts what happenin to the rappin/ dizz back N/ this rappin/ im a lyrical attackin and poetic cappa rappin/ lend me yo ears/ im the tears and the fears of all who hear/ Someone once told me better count yo blessin/ but im reminescin/ of kats i ended up messin/ wit dis smith and wesson/ Smith and Wesson mine/ disturb ya like ever seen Session 9/ This divine rhyme outshine the mime time you found this time/i rhyme/ fuck this beef lets get some mo rhymes/ enuff of this clownin/ in my eyes you be drownin/ when i drop my shit on wax and take it to town N/ im on the mound in/ this game you just a lyrical trick which/ in everyday terms means suck my dick bitch/
 
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RIX

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WTF????????? JIM HAT
WTF U ERASE MY POST FOR?>
WHAT CUZ U GOT CLOWNED?

UMM IF U WANNA BE A LIL BITCH ABOUT IT, IMMA SAVE ALL MY POSTS AND IF I SEE U DELETIN THEM, IMMA JUST POST UP FOO...

DONT HATE THA PLAYA HATE THA GAME, REMEMBER THAT SHIT, AND DONT SPEAK IN THA THREAD IF U GOT NOTHIN TO RAP BOUT AIGHT......
 
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JIM HAT

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May 13, 2002
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YOU WERENT CLOWIN ME! WHERE DID THAT COME FROM? YOU WERE TALKIN SHIT TO KP.. DONT HATE THE PLAYER HATE THE GAME? YOU FUCKIN DUMBASS..I HOPE YOU DONT BUMP THOSE GARBAGE FLOWS IN YOUR HONDA YOU FUCKIN MARK.. I WOULDNT DELETE THEM IF YOU WAS TALKIN TO ME. BUT YOU START TALKIN SHIT TO KP FOR NO REASON.. GET YOUR SHIT STRAIT..
 
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Kp

Sicc OG
#839
Oct 29, 2002
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I didn' want to have to do this

Alright kids, class' in session, so grab ya pen and pad/ I'm a school you mother fuckers, so soak this up like some Glad/ You kids don't even know how to write bars, watch how a real MC do it/ You wanna flow kids? I'm constant like a fluid/ I'm a real rapper, ya'al candy coated like M&M/ Nobody's Biz, balheadrix, stop acten feminine/ Cause you know you don't wanna see me when it's on the fuckin mic/ I spit the siccest shit, that every nigga like/ You lucky that I'm doin this, my rap shit ain't for free/ Every time you niggaz speak, you oughta be payen me/ And it's still kinda funny that I spit a battle rap/ I'm not a battle rapper, I'm not a battle cat/ But if you ever test my skills I'm a kill you niggaz slow/ YOU MOTHER FUCKERS SUCK, DON'T EVER TRY TO FLOW!/ Not even for fun, not even as a hobby/ Leave the rappen' to the pro's you could never ever dog me/ As far As A-Wax, that's my nigga what you know about it?/ Payen niggaz for heat? I got skills still unscouted!/ I'm not like you, you, you, or even you/ Jim Hat's my only nigga here your sucka shit is through/ I just woke up, its 1:51 on the dot/ It took me 6 minutes to write this, now who you think the mightiest?/ So don't ever speak my name again, I don't got time for little kids/ Stay on the siccness suckas cause your only lime light is this/
 
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