Curt--It would be hard for me to criticize your work-You're alot better than me-I typed some flows back letting you know I was really impressed. One point of style..."crack" is smoked, not snorted.
You got a post a little bit back where "smokin crack" would fit just as well as "snorting crack" rhythmically speaking.
Please be sure you are "smoking crack" and not "snorting crack" to help capture the true emotional essence of the main character's deep seated internal conflict.
Hope to hear back from ya. Iam now utterly stranded in this creepy wilderness alone. You may quote that if you absolutely must.
You got a post a little bit back where "smokin crack" would fit just as well as "snorting crack" rhythmically speaking.
Please be sure you are "smoking crack" and not "snorting crack" to help capture the true emotional essence of the main character's deep seated internal conflict.
Hope to hear back from ya. Iam now utterly stranded in this creepy wilderness alone. You may quote that if you absolutely must.