FATAL NYGHTMARE said:
This isn't the Sports forum homie, I don't use cop-out excuses like that. Thanks for the points, I'll definately take them into consideration. Of course, these are just fuck-around tracks.. I'd give it my all if I wind up getting on professional quality equipment.
Thanks for the feed.
yeah, I was just fucking with you about the 9ers shit. your writtens are raw, but writing isn't the only aspect of rap as you already know
IntenseFear said:
What are you talking about? The hook has more of a semi-singing sound to it.
it just seemed like it ran from the verse into the hook to me, the only difference i saw was the repitition and the beat change.
That is only to make it sound like there's more going on. I can do without those to be honest.
I believe it gives more life to lyrics and what you're saying. to each his own tho...
I think you just have a different preference in terms of delivery. In no way did it sound like he was reading off a paper. He just has a more rugged style than you want him to. You wouldn't happen to like Mistah FAB would you? Because judging by your advice, it sounds like you want FATAL to sound more like that clown.
I do like Mistah Fab actually. I just wish that fab didn't dumb his shit down to make crossover bay hits. I'm not telling Fatal to sound more like Fab (or anyone for that matter) but just to loosen up more and put as much effort as he does in his delivery as he does his lyrics. Some people have a perfect balance of delivery with lyrics, such as Mos Def, Black Thought, Jay-Z, Andre 3000, etc... I'm not telling him to be all rah rah like Redman and Luda, I'm not telling him to change to a style rapper like Keak and Turf Talk, be yourself, but show who you are....let your personality out on your music.