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Defy

Defy

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you got lyrics but your delivery is kinda boring. especially the hook, like there's no real difference between the way you're doing the hook and your verse. play with your delivery more, change shit up. do some adlibs or whatever that aren't just doubling up on your words. it kinda sounds like your just reading off the paper.


and no, I'm not just hating cuz you're 9er fan....your writing is hella tight, you just gotta loosen up more when you're rapping
 
FATAL NYGHTMARE

FATAL NYGHTMARE

Sicc OG
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Apr 25, 2002
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Defy said:
and no, I'm not just hating cuz you're 9er fan....
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This isn't the Sports forum homie, I don't use cop-out excuses like that. Thanks for the points, I'll definately take them into consideration. Of course, these are just fuck-around tracks.. I'd give it my all if I wind up getting on professional quality equipment.

Thanks for the feed.
 
IntenseFear

IntenseFear

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Feb 28, 2005
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Defy said:
you got lyrics but your delivery is kinda boring. especially the hook, like there's no real difference between the way you're doing the hook and your verse.
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What are you talking about? The hook has more of a semi-singing sound to it.

Defy said:
do some adlibs or whatever that aren't just doubling up on your words.
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That is only to make it sound like there's more going on. I can do without those to be honest.

Defy said:
it kinda sounds like your just reading off the paper.
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I think you just have a different preference in terms of delivery. In no way did it sound like he was reading off a paper. He just has a more rugged style than you want him to. You wouldn't happen to like Mistah FAB would you? Because judging by your advice, it sounds like you want FATAL to sound more like that clown.


Defy said:
your writing is hella tight, you just gotta loosen up more when you're rapping
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I like it the way it is, but to each his own.

Good shit regardless my nigga.
 
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Lil Oso XIV

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Oct 24, 2004
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MAN IS THAT NORTHERN CALI RAP????
ARE YOU A NORTHERN CALI FOOL OR WHAT????
I THOUGHT YOU WAS FROM THE SOUTH....
BETO, I THOUGHT YOU LIKE THAT LIL SLOB SHIT....

BUT 4REAL THOUGH, FATAL YOU COMIN WITH SOME TIGHT SHIT, JUST KEEP SPITTEN THEM UNDERGROUND RAPS. I THINK THE LAST MINUTE OR VERSE IS THE HARDEST OFF THE SONG, KEEPEM COMIN.
 
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Lil Oso XIV

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Oct 24, 2004
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WELL I SAW YOU SAYIN SOME SHIT ABOUT LIKIN LIL SLOB OR SOMETHIN.
MAN I AINT TRIPPEN, OR ACCUSIN. BUT I DOUBT IM WRONG....
JUST KEEP DOIN YOUR THING, BUT DONT SUPPORT THEM MAN.
I ASKED EASTCOCO FORUM ABOUT THE DISS BY BIG CERROTE, N THEY SAID I WAS SUPPORTIN HIS SHIT. EASTBAY RIDER DOESNT KNOW SHIT, N AS 4 A FACT I REMEMBER HIM N THE SAME THREAD I WAS SAYIN YOU WAS POSTIN N, COMMENTIN LEVAS N SHIT.
ITS ALL GOOD MAN, PLUS AT LEAST YOU SPIT REAL SHIT.
ATLEAST YOU RESPONDED, LIKE A MAN WOULD DO N THE CALLE
 
FATAL NYGHTMARE

FATAL NYGHTMARE

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Apr 25, 2002
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There's a lot of ignorance flying around that East Co Co forum.. That's the main reason I don't post in there anymore. There are a lot of cool homeboys that post up in there, but a lot of others are clowns flapping their chops.
 
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Lil Oso XIV

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Oct 24, 2004
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YEAH MAN THEIR IS A LOT OF MUTHAFUCKAS THAT MAKE IT NOT WORTH POSTIN N THEIR ANYMORE. I ADMIT SOMETIMES I GET MADE AT THE NET. THEN I REALIZE THEIR NOT TOOO MUCH I CAN DO, YA KNOW. I CANT PUT THE SMASH ON THEM FOR SAYIN WHATEVER IT IS THEY SAY.
YOU KNOW WHAT IM SAYIN. IVE POSTED THEIR FOR A WHILE NOW.
IVE SEEN YOU POST, SHIT HAS BEEN TALKED, N YOU REPOST BACK.
THATS HOW IT HAPPENS. IF YOU THINK THEIR WRONG, THEN SOMETHIN WILL BE SAID. THATS ALL I HAVE TO SAY.
I JUST CAME N THIS FORUM TO SEE N DO BATTLES.
IM SORRY IF CAME AT YOU WRONG N YOU WANT TO BAND ME FATAL, CUZ THAT WAS NOT MY INTENTION.
IF YOU ARE A HOMEBOY RAPPER, WHY HAVENT YOU SAID SHIT ABOUT THE SHIT YOU SPIT?
EVEN IF YOU ARENT A HOMEBOY, YOU COULD MAKE IT SOMEWHERE OFF OF YOUR FLOWS, BUT THATS JUST M.O.
 
FATAL NYGHTMARE

FATAL NYGHTMARE

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Apr 25, 2002
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Lil Oso XIV said:
IM SORRY IF CAME AT YOU WRONG N YOU WANT TO BAND ME FATAL, CUZ THAT WAS NOT MY INTENTION.
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I haven't seen you do anything wrong. Don't even trip homie.

Lil Oso XIV said:
IF YOU ARE A HOMEBOY RAPPER, WHY HAVENT YOU SAID SHIT ABOUT THE SHIT YOU SPIT?
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I'm not sure I understand your question.. Why haven't I said shit to who? Homeboys? Or do you mean why don't I promote my shit?
 
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