Ashtmatic vs X-Kalibur

[ForsakenedSoul]

Asthmatics first verse was pretty weak while x's was straight, but then asthmatic came bakk wit it with his second verse, although it did have its down points, most lines were pretty good, x's shyt was nyce, I wish he woulda threw in summa dat vocab prop woulda made it better.... but if he Asthmatic woulda started off hard like he did in his second verse he might have taken this..all in all my vote goes to X

 

[x-kalibur]

you cant bring heat like me cuzzin-
Im like superman. I dodge your lyrical words by the dozen-
your tongue thrust hard into one cheek-
no words can explain you *sucka* dont speak-
I know you can bring heat-
but your nothing compared to me. I knock folx off they feet-
Im emotionless similar to a syko-
creepin up on you in your room when the lights go-
you call me a bitch or a sucka Ill slice your bodie up in peices-
leavin you cut from the siccness-
eatin yo up like a peanut butter reeses-
hostile nigga, I wont hesitate two bust on any figga-
I be x-kalibur never forget my name-
cause you start the torch and set the flame-
now I think its time to shake the spot-
cause these words burnin my tongue *hot*-




weak but get at me with feedback.

 

[tank locc]

@x

what i ment was that ashtmatic wasnt even close to urs

 

[x-kalibur]

good shit. stay up tank. -out