HERESY said:
Baiting you into a quote war would actually be a waste of my time, but if I wanted to openly call you out and draw mass attention to your opinions I would do so. I am not out to get you, I am simply asking why you felt the article was a hit piece. You said tone and adverbs, but I don't see how the tone and adverbs contained in the article coincide with your views. No need to explain...
For the good of the forum, and because I often speak of Adverbs and the importance of their proper usage, as well as composition overall, I will happily supply you with a few examples. Perhaps I was being a bit curt, or unfair even.
"The U.S. military is conducting a propaganda campaign to magnify the role of the leader of al-Qaeda in Iraq, according to internal military documents and officers familiar with the program."
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"George W. Bush is a raving lunatic, a liar and a war criminal....according to documents obtained from Al Jazeera."
-- Get your attention by setting the bar as high as possible (this is meant to be a NEWS article, mind you, not an opinion piece)....hope nobody reads into your bullshit.
We will continue.
"The effort has raised his profile in a way that some military intelligence officials believe may have overstated his importance and helped the Bush administration tie the war to the organization responsible for the Sept. 11, 2001, attacks."
"Believe"..."May have"...only thing worse is when you combine the two together. Either you believe something or you don't, and when you need to string that many things together, you're obviously bullshitting and seeing things the way you want others to see them, and not the way they ought to be conveyed.
"Helped"......that was just pathetic. Find another verb that isn't so weak and childish, one that doesn't leave so many outs.
"For the past two years, U.S. military leaders have been using Iraqi media and other outlets in Baghdad to publicize Zarqawi's role in the insurgency. The documents explicitly list the "U.S. Home Audience" as one of the targets of a broader propaganda campaign."
Let us briefly discuss the repeated usage of "propaganda campaign". Last I checked....that was about the only way PROPAGANDA came. The problem is that they are continually playing up the negative connotation, rather than using a more objective analysis such as "information campaign", or "anti-terrorism campaign", or so on. Their true aim here is to continue a negative slant THROUGHOUT THE ENTIRE PIECE, while only mixing in somewhat unbiased observations here and there to keep the overall flow going.
This is only among the first few pieces of the article, and we are not impressed. The word propaganda appears 9 times.....there is simply no excuse for it.
The above analysis took around 15 minutes or less. Imagine if I put a good 2 hours into this, and I'm not even trained in this kind of shit.
I repeat:
Catching the #2 terrorist in the world IS IMPORTANT, whether he DESERVED that ranking or not.
Just as POSESSION is 9/10ths of the Law...
PERCEPTION IS 9/10THS OF REALITY!