A Little Keystyle(I NEED FEEDBACK)

[ovarbmu]

Dude doesn't seem too bad, but his layout is horrible and some of the punches were indirect (it's sad when someone who doesn't know either competitor knows when your disses are indirect) and some made no sense. He tries a little too hard to drop multis and forces a lot of them in the process, which is a major negative in these parts. I personally think Jabbz will take him apart. No disrespect intended, just my personal opinion. Stay up.

the way the board is set up pushes the text together and the posts cant be as wide as on cham.com so its lokks jubbled together. believe me, i know jabbz, he came in at the around the same time as me, he doesn't stand a chance. jabbz is live as fuck but no way will he EVER take this. believe me, i've seen some shit from proof.

*edit* all the punches made sense to me, tell me which ones confused you and ill explain them.

 

[FATAL NYGHTMARE]

I've cyphered with Jabbz on AIM and some of the shit I've seen from him will shit on what you just posted. The tourny he won was nothing. The reason I'm even speaking on it is because none of you have seen anything Jabbz has to offer. His flow is smoother, his punches are more direct and precise, his rhymes aren't forced, his metaphors are untouchable.... You're either trippin or you just don't know what's up if you feel Jabbz has no chance against dude.

 

[ovarbmu]

first of all bro, you know this aint no beef type shit right? i respect you and jabbz(don't completely like him, but whatever), its just comp. i feel like i never got any respect on here and i got niggas that are livier than anything i've seen from him(I DONT MEAN THIS AS DISRESPECT), so i just wanted him to see this, not to shit on him or anything because i know jabbz will hang, he just wont win. i know what jabbz is about, im just trying to inform you of these wild ass niggas i came across.

 

[NewBay510]

my opinion. jabbz would beat Proof from what ive seen comin from both of em

 

[FATAL NYGHTMARE]

first of all bro, you know this aint no beef type shit right?

Yes sir. I know what you're doin homie, don't trip.

i respect you and jabbz(don't completely like him, but whatever)

That's what I like to see. You don't have to like somebody to have respect for them. That's something most people don't understand. Jabbz is cocky, and a lot of people don't like that, but to be true to themselves they still have to show respect for the talent the man shows.

i got niggas that are livier than anything i've seen from him(I DONT MEAN THIS AS DISRESPECT)

OK I don't completely understand your slang, but I'm assuming by you saying you got people liver than Jabbz you mean you got people better than Jabbz, right? Based on what I've seen I'm gonna have to say that's a matter of opinion. Unless your boy has come harder than what you posted, I don't share your opinion. But like I said, I've seen shit from Jabbz that blows away everything he's posted here.

Jabbz is kinda like an adaptive competitor.... meaning he only drops shit that he feels is a notch above his opponent's level. When he battles rookies he doesn't drop his hottest shit, because he doesn't have to. He's never really battled someone who actually gave him a run for his money. The most competition he's ever had was Curt B, and if you ask me I'd have to say his verse against Curt was better than your boy's verse that you posted, even though some said he coulda came harder.

not to shit on him or anything because i know jabbz will hang, he just wont win.

I'd call you on that one homie. I believe Jabbz would win that battle. I'm not saying your boy is no good, basically I'm saying he's not as good as you think he is. Obviously your opinion is gonna be biased because he's rollin with you, and that's understandable.

The thing is, Jabbz and your boy Proof Evident have different styles. Your boy seems like he's a punchline lyricist, which is nice, but Jabbz is more of a battle artist. His style is smoother all around, he can easily hang with your boy's rhymes and punches, and he knows how to please the spectators by dropping metaphors that are complicated but at the same time they're simple enough for the dumber people to understand. There are many things to take into consideration when judging a battle and Jabbz consistently has proven he possesses everything it takes to win.

I'm not guaranteeing Jabbz will win if they battled, all I'm saying is you have to give him more credit than you seem to be giving. I know you feel dude is tough, but so is Jabbz. I think it would be a good battle and I would love to see it.

i know what jabbz is about, im just trying to inform you of these wild ass niggas i came across.

I think I speak for everyone when I say any competition is welcome here on the Siccness, but don't expect the same reaction as they may get on other boards. This is a different community with different preferences. Remember that....

 

[ovarbmu]

first of all let me say this.......im a fan of lyricism. i believe proof is a better battler than jabbz, MAYBE better lyricist, im not entirely sure of all of his straight studio wise skills but i know proof would win in a battle. i've seen jabbz battles and i've seen proof's battles and there is almost no comparision there in my mind. i know how jabbz adjusts his shit for different skill levels, i picked up on that after a while of seeing him battle. i came back to siccness with the intent to battle jabbz one last time. the fact now that i want proof to battle him is not to embarass him, but to let him know, hes not the best around. i've seen some shit from proof as you have from jabbz so thats why we both feel so strong about our arguments. i gave respect the whole time i was on this board but hardly ever received it. im back here to take whats mine. i could have EASILY won the cham.com tourny, but i gave it up to another little guy like i used to be, so he could win it. i was live(sorry for the slang), i mean good, before but now my skills are excellent. im ready to take on jabbz and then after our battle proof is gonna show him whats up. fatal i respect your talent as well(i bumped the shit out of 'damage to hip hop' and 'jeopardy') so im glad even though im not as much of a vet as you are, your not like some of these other assholes and at least discuss it with me. thanks.