I see what your saying. But like I said I get really BORED. That's my problem. I ain't got no rapper by my side creating energy, I don't know what the chorus is going to sound like. It's just an empty beat with no lyrics. Rap needs lyrics to help complete the beat & vibe, which I don't have. Listen to a lot of instrumentals, the energy or feeling that your talking about is lost without the rapper in there, it's like a hollow space and you know something is missing. It just sounds too repeatative without the rapper in there. Rap loops a lot. I've never heard a rap beat that buildups from the beginning to the end. The beat usually starts abruptly and ends abruptly, only real change ups for the chorus. Not that there's anything wrong with that, but my point is it's just boring without the lyrics. It's hard to vibe to just the beat itself, most often than not it sounds like it's missing something, which are the lyrics. The voice is an instrument which Rap needs.
Cool beat BTW. The talkbox is definitely an instrument in this beat.
Listen to either my TripHop beat or that last trance beat remix, to understand what I'm trying to say when I say build-ups. Listen to how it takes about a 1minute for the main climax to hit. In both those songs I made, the main climax comes in at 1:03. So it takes a minute to buildup. The beat makes you wait and anticipate the climax. It doesn't need lyrics, the energy comes from the music in that case. Rap doesn't build up like that, that's what I'm trying to say and if it does it becomes unrappable or atleast unconventional sounding. That's just too many pauses and buildups for it to be truely rappable. I don't know man, but maybe I personally have a better ear for genres other than Rap. Maybe I should stick to Triphop, lounge, trance, electronical type stuff.
TripHop:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/5210046383e2bc6f/
Trance Remix:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/52149003ad10ad93/