18 with a lenyo/spliff
- Thread starter MastermindE-low
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I hate to be so brutally honest, but that wasnt good, i think i see what your trying to do, but it almost sounds like your forcing your voice to sound a certain way or match the beat in some way, you need to let the words flow more, and open up the subject matter also, i honestly got bored before the end. also i dont know if you were pulling your face away from the mic but the vocal volume was going up and down. I think if you get your flow down, pick some faster/better beats and express your mind more than try and focus on a single subject youll be much better, but im not going to straight up diss on you for trying, youre obviously just starting, but with all that needs to be worked on there is def potential, develop yourself and it will be good to hear another solid rapper from salinas someday....imo
thanks for the feedback its all good what u think of the beat?you kinda makin me feel bad lol i been doing this since like 02 check out my free cd featuring alot of the 8tre uno. http://www.greenrm420records.com/music.htm
that might be it, the beat was alright, what i was getting at before is its just kinda repetative, i think its kinda of too short a loop to be repeated again and again, maybe if it was mastered and i had better bass on my computer speakers it wouldnt seem that way but it was real repatative thats what i meant before when i said by the end of the song i felt bored
