Yo! No i meant i didnt really feel the way you cut the lyrics into small pieces. That shed so many tears demo sound pretty dope - except for the not so great audio - its just that i personally feel you should respect the way these rappers put their lyrics on tape and not cut them up and puzzle them into a new context
I hope you get what im trying to say here
Also: who is the third/ last rapper on the shed so many tears? I know that verse, just cant remember who it is?