i dont know why i bothered clicking and listening to this, but it wasnt as bad as i was expecting, in fact it wasnt bad at all. the first verse was pretty nice and the song started strong, then i felt there were too many different like, "melodies" or whatever you want to call it like it wasn't as cohesive and strong as it started out it like you couldn't just nod your head the same way the whole song cause the flow of it changes too much you know what im saying. what the hell do i know, im not a fucking rap critic im just giving you my initial reaction for whatever reason
keep at it