the title Corys Story is really kinda Corny
To tell you the truth dude, you raps really just bore me
what did you use for recording? a karoake deck or radio shack mic?
WHAT_IN_THE_FUCK would ever make you think that shit was tight?
I tried to give it a listen even though I approached it with fear
30 seconds later my stomach hurts and Im bleeding from my ears
have you ever heard of punctuation? thats one thing I would like to mention
your supposed to pause, its call a comma, in the middle of a sentence
i couldnt understand a word you were saying, were you the one to write it?
I tried to listen to the whole thing, but my laughter, i couldnt hide it
rappin really fast aint what it takes to make you sound tight
take them marbles out ya mouth before you decide its time to rhyme
cant say that im suprised that this shit was weaker than i imagined
my expectations have lowered to new depths and its forming a pattern
cause every day in the bay somebody decides they wanna become a rapper
when they need light a match to that notebood where all that ink is splattered
i waited, and gave you a chance.., now I regret that I heard it
Got cats on BART reactin worse to this than they did the Mehserle verdict
as a matter of fact, i know you know, that I know , that your really wack
so im gonna leave you with your thoughts and just leave it at that....
im just being real
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