Yo Lynch Loki & Zagg please tell me what you think of this rhyme

[LeathaFase]

i wrote this when i was 7 i'm 12 but anyway i want you tell me what you think - PEACE

I got no friends cause i killed 'em all dead
I got a whole crew of demons freestylin in my head
Some pack a gat but I pack an axe i hack you in the back like that splat look in the mirror say what the fuck you lookin at then i punch the glass now my fist is all smashed but i don't give a fuck cause i'm thriving on pain man you won't survive this game

 

[THA RIPPA]

thats tight...........
























for a 7 year old

 

[T-Spoon]

^^^^lol. fold.

 

[LeathaFase]

FUCK BLACK MARKET

FUCK BLACK MARKET
Black Market and Ced Singleton can "Rest In Piss"

 

[Unkut Yola]

WTF?!?! ...eh homie yo rhyme had very sicc intentions but, tha rhyme scheme was kinda off towards tha end ... i think u got potential

 

[loki]

keep at it, youngster.
the only way to get good at it is
to keep at it. the true test is to
hear it on wax. get yaself in
front of a microphone.