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[Dvious]

everytime I close my eyes...it's no surprise..once again I sell myself a dream
cuz I'm wishin for shit I'm never gonna get wich diminishes my self esteem
and my health it seems...is slowly corroding from this tidal wave of stress and pain
and tryin to hide from this flood of frustration doesn't make me any less insane
strait edge pressed on viens..if there's lessons to gain..I guess I didn't make the grade
should I continue to play this game of life...or leave it now with impressions from this razor blade
death was taylor made..cuz as far as I'm concerned..life just doesn't fit too well
at least when I'm released from this prison of life..I won't be goin back to hell

just a little flow off the top...


ghost
:devious:

 

[All Out HOGG]

I think people come tightest when they vent stress...this shits no exception...

Dunno if others will feel...Fuck it thou

 

[WcMalice]

Clean shit Dvious.....I'm likin the subject of the shit and the flow of it, everythings works. I like your sentence structure.....sorta similar to how I write my lines sometimes.

 

[Greg Double]

nyce rhyme mayne.. i think we all feelin it in our own ways.. i can relate for sho.. yeah str8 shit

paece

 

[KODOGG]

Yea nice rhyme Im feelin' the concept.. I like how ya' used big words inbetween and wit the rhyme too.. And I feel ya' hogg on how people make the best rhymes when venting.