Short 8 Bar Verse

[KODOGG]

Pull-Techs, Slap-Tricks,Hit-Licks,Inflict-Lyrical-Pain //
You should strap-a-'rolex' to your ankle to 'watch'-your-step //
I've been taken into a police-station several times-cuz-my-rhymes resemble Death-Threats //
Slit-Necks and nut in your ear, Cuz 'Fuck'-What-Ya-Heard, Cuz B.A.U.R.S killz computer-nerds //
If I had a penny fo' eachtime I murdered a Emcee I'd fill the poorest mans change-cup //
Rearange-Your-Luck cuz It's finnaly over, tonight you gonna die 'n ill be your shoufuer //
I got a throwback doused in 3-Leaf-Clovers, you's a 'bitch' and your style needs a 'make-over' //
Leave you hangin from my widnow like Micheal Jacksons Baby //
When I get the west coast crackin-the-east-gon-blame-me! //


Sorta new style I guess.. I liked it.. Tell me what y'all think??

 

[ZG-ZeroGravitY]

its aight.. was kinda rough in some spots.. keep trying

 

[Piru Luv [ADT]]

I take it that your unaware of exactly what a metaphore is, because that piece didn't have a single one in it. A metaphore is a way of usen a comparisson. I.E. Im hot like the summer, or I leave fools laughing at your raps and saying "HA" like juvenile. You get the idea?

 

[KODOGG]

Nvm I get it.. But.. Umm.. Isnt

Put a rolex on your ankle to watch ur step a metaphore??

 

[KODOGG]

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[FATAL NYGHTMARE]

Put a rolex on your ankle to watch ur step a metaphore??

yes

 

[KODOGG]

Thought so.

 

[Chaos]

not bad...