RD1 'ConnDemned Vs All Hallowz Eve"

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May 3, 2002
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Damn I had to put the Doc CD on pause to write this.//
All Hallowz, sendin' lyrical hollow tips,//
to ConnDemned's lips.//
Just rearranged my combatant tactics.//
Dare you to match wits.//
But static arises and you act frantic.//
Little homie please don't panic.//
But I'm huntin' you like deer meat.//
Shotgun bullets pierce through your fleece,//
Puncture your cardio, takin' your heart beat.//
So you're ConnDemned? Condemned to what?//
To a life of rap, in which you succ,//
and is constantly gettin' tucced?//
Did you really think you could beat me at rappin'?//
It's more likely to see a Brazillian cannible use a napkin.//
So I guess it was you to be my next hit.//
Put this flow on the next Faces of Death flicc.//
Don't respond ain't no need for me to write again.//
All you heard was a deep voice from Smurf sayin' "FINISH HIM!"//

Go ahead and remix my flow... It's predictable....
 
Apr 25, 2002
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Comin' at me like I don't got shit up my sleeve//
boy, all your gonna be known as is a tombstone that reads "all hallowz eve"//
while ya loadin' your shot gun I'm unloadin' mine//
deep into the base of your spine//
I'm not about a quick and easy killin'//
it's like fishing with me and I'm slowly reelling//
You's an actor tryin' to be hated//
but your fate has already been slated//
lyrical suicide for tryin' to take me out//
you better go bust a nut, 'cause you're not gonna be the father to a lil sprout//
tryin' to say Imma remix your weak ass flow//
now aint that some shit that you'd expect from a lil dicked hoe//
this rappin' text style aint my style of curds//
I believe actions speak louder then words//
let's see who's gonna actually step away from the keyboard//
and draw they sheathed sword//



*damn smurf you shoulda told me this was up, I almost didn't reply*
 
Apr 25, 2002
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ConnDemned said:
this rappin' text style aint my style of curds//
Excuses excuses, no offense but if ya aint good at keystylin then why do you even waste your time an try? That's the second or third time I've seen someone say something like that in their rhymes.
 
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All Out HOGG

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#9
Conndemmed...Id'a IM'd ya informing you...But ya not on my buddy list :(
 
Apr 25, 2002
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aight.. this was for sure the closest one i seen so far..

All Hallowz- you had some tight shit and some shit that was just plain weak. i've seen better from you.

Condemned- you had same shit.. some tight.. some stupid. no real shit that made me go ohh shit like the Napkin line Hallowz wrote..

so.. Vote = All Hallowz Eve
 
May 9, 2002
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Sniko's Thoughts--

Both had similar styles...similar basic styles...reminds me almost of how i started out like 2 years ago...then i might have thought it was good..but now?..nah...

this line is the decider for me:
So you're ConnDemned? Condemned to what?//
To a life of rap, in which you succ,//

it's a shitty line...but the way i was flowing to it..it just kinda sounded funny....

VOTE = ALL HALLOWZ EVE
 

I AM

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Apr 25, 2002
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All Hallowz Eve said:

Did you really think you could beat me at rappin'?//
It's more likely to see a Brazillian cannible use a napkin.//

Don't respond ain't no need for me to write again.//
All you heard was a deep voice from Smurf sayin' "FINISH HIM!"//

these lines did it for me. they pretty much ate up conndemmed's entire verse.

vote=all hallowz eve
 

Daveyboy

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Apr 25, 2002
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aight i liked hollowz shit very nice...but like tim-c said some retarded shit....

connDemned...you had some good shit too...but you fucked up...for some unknown reason i felt i already knew what you where gonna put before i even read it...."you better go bust a nutt..cause your not gonna be the father of a lil sprout"...wtf did that come from...


vote------------------------------------ALL HOLLOWZ EVE
 
May 9, 2002
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My vote goes to ....

All Hollow Eves... I think he knowed what he was talkin about and he had it together and he had direct disses[it means he said his oppenets name & made it obvious who he was dissing]

Condemmed's...That was hella funny!!!!


MY VOTE GOES TO ALL HOLLOW EVES!!!!
 
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All Out HOGG

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Re: My vote goes to ....

HotCarolinaBabe said:
All Hollow Eves... I think he knowed what he was talkin about and he had it together and he had direct disses[it means he said his oppenets name & made it obvious who he was dissing]

Condemmed's...That was hella funny!!!!


MY VOTE GOES TO ALL HOLLOW EVES!!!!
I Agree with everything she said...& Thanks for explaining what a direct disses is...Sometimes i wonder with some'a the fools on the site know what it is...[MYSELF INCLUDED IT SEEMS]...

Hallowz Eve...He came ready for a battle & his verse showed that...While lyrically it wasn't the best...Its not often ya catch someone who rymes 'Fleece" with 'Meat"...so gotta give him granny goose creativeity points...PLUS THIS LINE IS CLASSIC 'All you heard was a deep voice from Smurf sayin' "FINISH HIM!"// "

While i wouldn't say Condemmed's verse was so horrible to laff at it...He wasn't up to par...& could have came better...Even thou he did have some good ideas...& a broader supply of creation 'let's see who's gonna actually step away from the keyboard//
and draw they sheathed sword// "...

OVERALL...I haft to vote for ALL HALLOWZ EVE...He desired to take shit wit'a battle verse & thas what he gott...A simple victory...
 
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Well thanks ya'll, like Tim-C- said I've done better. So round two? Oh yeah I'm gonna come heated. I can't say that any of my lyrics was strait retarded though... Maybe not top of the list but not even low enough to say retarded. But thanks and stay up...